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2008 Ch. 07

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by Anonymous

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by sexmate04/21/10

Interesting Chapter!

Especially them helping Brad.

Your twist on Kaye's Ailment and why she did what she did (Whoring) was lacking in chapter 5. Glad to see it semi explained.

When will chapter 8 be out? And the other 2?

Thanks for writing!

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by Eric_Shift04/22/10

Better man than I

I could not forgive so easily.
And then helping the brother get back with wife.
I guess that's what having a understanding woman can do to a hardened person, And I guess Pete has two understanding women to help.
Did I ever mention how I envy this man.

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by The1Paladin05/07/10

Strange...

That was a strange conversation with the mother at the end.

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by Anonymous09/17/11

Little sloppy

I've lost track of all the small gaffs in this chapter. One is that Elizabeth started in leotards and then were suddenly in bikinis. Second is that I recall nothing of "Kaye was willing to go to the cabin and unwilling to work things out, unless I would allow her to keep doing strangers anytime she got a whim." Did you really have Kaye say that or is that Pete's interpretation or something else?

R

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