When Worlds Collide Ch. 01

I'm Already Hooked

Yes, I'm hooked. How you can pack so much intrigue into barely 3 pages, I don't know. You have added not only new characters, but a wonderful story line for the Weres. I'm off to start Chapter 2 right now!!!!!!

Praiseworthy, as always

I accidentally read 2 chapters from the council and immediately realized that there was a section prior to it, so i started on this. And I must say, you have very good grasp of your plot and characters! So much intrigue, excitement and mystery all packed in just a few pages. Hahaha... guess it's gonna be a looooong night for me again!

Loving it!

Just one chapter and i'm hooked. You have a gift with words =)

didn't you once tell me...

... that you couldn't write bad guys? I beg to differ missy! The beginning of this story is fantastic but what makes it differ from your previous work is Richard. Finaly we have a villain, and what a villain he is. What makes him so creepy and so evil is the simple fact that like real life bad guys he actualy thinks he's doing the wright thing. In just a few paragraphs you succeeded in creating an incredibly complex antagonist. Frankly, I am amazed by your talent.

Wow hey,

I like the Demitri story, but this one is shaping up to be even better. Moving along merrily to the next chapter! (Jeez I love finding new authors with lots to catch up on. Such fun! LOL)

Good

I think it very good so far. Glad it's a stand alone story, since it is the first of yours I am reading. Gotta go read the next chapter! : )

WOW!!!!!!!!

I read ALWH first by accident and have been reading the rest of your stories non-stop trying to keep to the order. I couldn't help but comment as soon as I read the last word of this one and all I can say is WOW!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE everything you put down.

WOW !

I didn"t expect to read this caliber story when I started. The characters are real, the story line is fantastic ! Iwill post this at the first chapter as well as here at the end. This is excellently done! I found this by trolling through Literotica, I hope others will look for this series for a very good read!
Thanks for the enjoyment and please, write again !!

Thank You!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE the way you branched out and wrote a series including love stories for the different characters in the first lot of stories, I read, belonging to you. I admit I was hoping to come across Rafe's story.

You really are trigging my interested author, you truly are aweesome :)

Honestly I find the Weres much more fun than the Vampires.

I mean they go through the centuries, alone, bored. I kinda shows.

I love reading it again.

Thank you. Ganna

Re-living your stories

I've been following your stories from the moment you wrote FTI. Now three years later, I'm revisiting all your stories and all the characters whom I have fallen in love with. I hope you never stop writing :)

WOW!

I'm amazed at how good you are at starting the new chapters of this series! I thought it would level out and just kinda blend, but you've surprised me! You're one of the best authors I've read so far!

Anticipating more

I really enjoy reading your story. Your words are engaging and well written. I'm looking forward to reading more of this.

Yay

Found Rafes story!!!

Ditto on the yeah

Have you resubmitted this story or renamed it as I remember reading this whole series before and I am sure I put it in my favorites and gave you 5 stars all the way!!! Oh well from me you now have 10 stars all the way :)

richard graves is a bastard

anyone else want to kill richard graves?

huh

This seems to be one of those stories that is for women, by women. This story is good but where is the naked. Nothing makes a really good story like this into a really great story like some sex scene. Think of Lord of the rings and how much better it could have been with 4 or 5 sex scenes.

To anon: It's a series. Like in: there are more chapters. And wasn't there some rumor floating around that 'Lord of the Sphincter' was written by the-boyscouts-for-the-boyscouts, making it possible that many would disagree with you on adding the sex-aspect to that particular story-line?
JazCullen: I was trying to find the beginning of all of it, but once I started reading this chapter, I'll stick to this part first. Hope Aaron doesn't die. I like the idiot.

FTI

evebroughtanaxthistime: The start off the series Is FTI (Fighting The Inevitable) and its the title of the whole series. It is now available in book or eBook form at apple or amazon.
Read Jaz Cullen's bio.
Yeah, I agree, too much sex makes stories distasteful.