When Worlds Collide Ch. 01

Another good one

Love your work

Thank You

Love this!!!!!

Oye! You did it AGAIN!!!

Okay, this was an amazing start, Jaz. Seriously. I loved Rafe’s denial at first seeing Lacey then…oh baby! I cannot wait to see how these two dance around the Were mating topic and how she will adjust, but knowing you, it will be FANTASTICALLY written and have my heart thumping.

Aaron is just a hunk and a valiant protector. Hurry, please, on chapter 2 so I know what happens! I’m dying!

Last comment. I love that you show the changes that Millie introduced in FTI to the Hanlon Pack and how they are integrated within this introduction. It’s impressive just how thorough you are in the connections. Can be difficult with such a long tale, but you are keeping it all in sync!

Well done!!!

Yay!

Happy dance! XD

you did it again !!!
and what a cliffhanger as well.
i'm curious about summer, but this one takes prio in my opinion. Don't keep us hanging too long for the next chapter.
(and the writing gets better each time as well)

Yay!

So glad these guy are back. I love all of them. . And I totally looovve Rafe's new attitude. . Its so Alpha like. Fantastic first chapter. Can't wait.

Great start

I love it i love it i love it. So glad you are doing Rafe story.

Wooohooo

Oh dear I feel I'm turning into such a groupie checking for new parts of the stories/new stories each day.

Keep it up Jaz :) xxx

LOL I feel like I'm turning into a bit of a groupie too!

Fab to see Rafe's story starting - sensitive alpha (oxymoron? Discuss lol) is one of my guilty pleasures, so am over the moon!

Have to say kudos to you, you've very quickly become a one of the writers that I actively look for, and then do a little happy dance inside when I see a new story/chapter :)

Love it!!

I enjoy this series of stories immensely and I've eagerly awaited Rafe's tale. Looking forward to your next chapter.

This is beautiful!!!!!!

All ur stories are beautiful! Please give me more to read! Can't wait for the next story!!!!!

fan 4 a while

i've read the other two in the series. Just keeps on getting better.

Okay. I've got a complaint and I'm going to let you have it!

You're making the rest of us look bad. Dumb down a bit or at least do a story that isn't so fanfuckingtastic. I'm tired of getting made into a second class author.
As always, your work is heads and tails above the rest. I always look forward to more. I bow before the Queen!

enjoyed it very much- I am looking forward to the next installment!!

HOW DARE YOU !!!!

How dare you leave me hangin like this ??. As always a great story but i need more lolxx

that's it

Now I know my whole week will be wasted as I keep checking for updates on this story and get sucked in to Literotica again. Work will suffer because you're starting me off on another of your excellent stories. So grateful for your talent.
Cheers.

Fantastic!

I am another who will be glued to their pc looking for the next instalment of this story. Your way of writing is excellent and the details you give of your characters makes it easy for us to build up a picture in our "mind's eye" which is really great as it lets our imagination run riot too!
I really enjoy your work so much.
Keep up the good work!

ahh why

WHY did you have to stop there tease i tell you!! loving this story soo far cant wait to read more would maybe like to see aaron falling for the friend jennifer somebody hard ass against his laid back attitude!!!
Max

Eeek

I like this...really like it. Rafe sounds great. I can't wait for more....

like it

This is a great start looking forward to more

YAY!

I'm so excited! I've been waiting for Rafe's story. I can't wait to see what happens.

Great!!!

This is great. I love it. Can't wait for more. Keep them coming fast.

thank you

i do love the start to rafes story, and i really do beleive that if rafe allows his wolf to be one with him he is going to be one badass wolf with a heart

Have I told you lately

how amazing you are? Seriously, Jaz. The awesome just keeps coming. You're rocking my face off here. I loved what you just did with Demetri and Mara and am now thoroughly sucked into Rafe's story. Yes, in one chapter you sucked me into his story. =)

I'm anxious to find out who Richard is and what might happen to Lacey before Rafe and Aaron teach him manners with respect to women! Keep up the amazingfantasticsensuous stories. I love it!

you are really sucking me in with these stories!!! can't wait til the next chapter

OH Your so Wicked!!!

You know Jaz, Your just too wicked of a writer, LEAVING us hanging on the first chapter is like soooo evil woman..lol Wonderful Chapter and obviously can't wait to read more..

Donna.

Damn it Jaz!

You need to post more chapters now you can't do this to me leaving it there! Your driving me mad!

you are the bomb

Your stories are wonderful to read, love it, you need a book deal bad.
you are just to damn good, one of the best. please keep posting the stories.
I think aaron will find his mate next.

People do you know who it could be?


I think i know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love it

ur an amazing writer I love alll the stories u've written so far. Cant wait til the next chapter

Excellent start!

This seems like it will be just as great as the other two stories in the series! Keep the chapters coming!!

Oh man I can't wait to read how the story plays out :)

Jaz is my favorite!!

You are my favorite author...that is all.

Type faster

You need to get a publisher. I love your stories.

brilliant like the others girl!

lovely start

once again i am waiting in anticipation of another chapter of yours. your work is beautiful. i like the realistic characters, yes i know they are non human, but the emotions and actions are realistic. good luck with any and all future endevors

Congratulations...

another amazing piece!! I so love your work, it is full of depth and interesting personal touches that bring the characters soul. Can't wait to read more :)

OMG!!!

You are unbelievable!!! I'm hooked and it's the first chapter.... I am so totally a fan... WOW!

NOOOOOOOO!

How could you leave me hanging like that! PLEASE GIVE ME MORE!!!

Awesome, as always

beautiful

i need more quick please its like a fix of heroine just gotta have it

Fantastic adventure and sure to come romance!

Just recently found your work. Fabulous.

WOMAN!

I'm going to kill you for leaving it like this!!!!! lol
Oh you better add another chapter soon! I need to know what happens. HURRY! Why are you reading this??? write write write!!!! Oh by the way, lovely chapter :) hahaha and it seems like it will be another great story for you! :) Cant wait to read more!
Going back.........why are you still reading this?!? GO BACK TO WORK! I need the second chapter! You're stories are like an addiction!! lol

fantastic...

as always. you're ability to connect with your readers on such a level is amazing and delightfully received. i for one am hoping to see u published in the near future.

As always ...

very impressive. Also, I agree with the others. Keep it coming and quickly!!! I was wondering what you were going to do with Rafe and Aaron, now I can't wait to find out :)

More

And soon, please. This is not a genre I normally read, but I'm so glad I did so today. I'm hooked on this story!

omg!

would you stop getting me hooked on your stories! :] jk i don't mind being a addict! please write more sooon, Rafe's happy ending is crucial!

loved it!

As always, I am hooked and anxiously waiting for the next chapter - I agree with the others, can't wait until you are published! Your stories are riveting! Thank you for sharing your talent with us!!!!!

Why?????

Did you leave me hanging like this.......Hurry, please hurry with your next installment.

juicy!

this is a juicy story. i hope you will post the next chapter soon. :)

That ending wasn't fair! glad I caught it when there were several chapters...jeez jaz :) great new cast and glad to see the old ones. aaron's an adorable man-whore and rafe...well hope he gets his mate.