Given his distaste with the new Stella, she must have had to work hard to land him. Unfortunately, the reader didn't get to see That side of her. So her cheating and kicking him to the curb was no surprise. The only surprise is why he ever married her.
Reading this, it felt like a JPB story. This is not an insult. I like his stories and his writing style. It was sort of a 'full circle' tale, but I am not sure we went the full 360 degrees.
Enjoyed it and I will need to read (or reread) more of your stories.
I do agree this does have elements of JPB story in it !
However still a lretty good read though.
ForcmecI would like to See Stalla reconcile with her Ex husband and get him back with total faithfulness, passion, redemption, and humiliation on her part !
Thst would be a good sequel.
Perhaps Jack can have words with Stella to encourage her to pursue her ex husband.
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Given his distaste with the new Stella, she must have had to work hard to land him. Unfortunately, the reader didn't get to see That side of her. So her cheating and kicking him to the curb was no surprise. The only surprise is why he ever married her.
I had read this before
But it seems I had not left a comment.
Reading this, it felt like a JPB story. This is not an insult. I like his stories and his writing style. It was sort of a 'full circle' tale, but I am not sure we went the full 360 degrees.
Enjoyed it and I will need to read (or reread) more of your stories.
better for both.
They were obviously not suited for each other, they both wanted to be the boss instead of partners
Well written.
Queen Bee Element !
I do agree this does have elements of JPB story in it !
However still a lretty good read though.
ForcmecI would like to See Stalla reconcile with her Ex husband and get him back with total faithfulness, passion, redemption, and humiliation on her part !
Thst would be a good sequel.
Perhaps Jack can have words with Stella to encourage her to pursue her ex husband.
you ask for comments in each story
I don't know what to say except keep doing what you've been doing. It's pretty cool.
cost
what you pay for something is very different from the cost or value
She hadn't slept with him - yet
He made the right decision,
for the right reason
5
5 Stars. Good story. No loose ends. Well done.
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