All Comments on 'Campsite with a View'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
What a vacation

Hot sex in an unusual evironment. Well written, although Ben should have gotten Cheryl's phone number at least.

playman64playman64almost 14 years ago
WOW

This is a great story, I enjoyed reading and cumming.

I do like group sex.

Steve

curious_valeriecurious_valeriealmost 14 years ago
fabulous

HI...

I love your writing style! I go camping alot. But have never done anything like this before! maybe yet... Your stories always get me so wet. Thank you for that. I think i may go finish myself off in the backyard!

Val

Drawu12Drawu12almost 14 years ago
Enjoyed!

What a good story! I think most people fantasize about doing something like this. Maybe I'll see you in the woods....

alli90alli90almost 14 years ago
Sex outdoors is the best

You can really write. I like the way the story unfolds and gets more intense and kinky with each paragraph. Being in the woods is so erotic anyway, filled with great potential. Thanks for a really good story.

GiraffemanGiraffemanover 13 years ago
hot hot hot

Another well written story from this young lady. Her stories get me hot and horny everytime. You have a wild imagination or a fantastic life my girl xx

flowernibblerflowernibblerover 10 years ago
That a really good E&V story

I loved how Cheryl gave in and got what her mouth, pussy, and psyche really wanted. Loved her climaxes. She got most of what she had always dreamed about when she freed her mind to wonder in the gardens of love.

This was a well-written story, which included a dramatic look inside Cheryl 's mind as the action proceeded..

OlingerOlingerover 9 years ago
Very hot!

Well written and erotic! I was stroking my cock as I watched them having sex out doors..what a turn on

BodyartistBodyartistover 8 years ago
Excellent Story

Great story with a sexy start, building all the way...!! Excited me no end...!!

To hear a Ladies perspective , made it so Erotic and hot...!

10towers10towersover 8 years ago
A variation on my past years ago

Never had an experience like this outdoors with others watching, but had wonderful times at a swingers club for three years. It is really a turn on to both watch and be watched. It is stimulating to have someone come up to you and say they enjoyed watching.

I have now read about a third of your stories, and it is so easy to go right to your offerings by simply doing a google search of your pen name. I really find your writing top notch, but am sad there was only one submission in all of 2015. Hope you write more often in 2016.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The best of my thought I love hiking camping adore masturbating. The thought of doing it in the open forest. Is mind blowing. I want to watch others. I fantasize about them watching me. All those added together would be simply wonderful

Rosika66Rosika664 months ago

Loved the female perspective. Great story. Very hot!!!

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