I enjoyed the series very much. I tried to ignore the spelling problems which often turned into "wrong word" problems - such as using fell when you meant to use feel. But the characters were lively and easy to believe. The dialogue was excellent and there was plenty of it. I wouldn't mine if the series continued just bring it to an "honest" conclusion - don't just write "The End"
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Real Good Series
I enjoyed the series very much. I tried to ignore the spelling problems which often turned into "wrong word" problems - such as using fell when you meant to use feel. But the characters were lively and easy to believe. The dialogue was excellent and there was plenty of it. I wouldn't mine if the series continued just bring it to an "honest" conclusion - don't just write "The End"
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