All Comments on 'Evening Light Ch. 05'

Great story that's well written!

I'm really enjoying reading this, I definitely love these characters. It's hard to hate Lucas, even when he is acting like a jackass. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more coming.

Lucas really is an idiot of the highest order..not liking this hero at all...

He finally learns to keep his mouth shut. Now if he can just get the timing thing down. Still loving this story.

I'm more and more disgusted with each chapter. The main characters are nauseating. She for being one more amongst countless idiotic clueless woman falling in lust with an asshole, and he for just being a walking dick with no consideration for anyone but himself. Romance? Don't make me laugh! Why is it nobody seems to have any control, one look at a good looking person and they are ready to just drop pants?