All Comments on 'Happy Life with My Father-in-Law Ch. 01'

Only word to describe this is BLAh

Third world

Overall the story is erotic and the sex scenes ate hot.

The sentence structure is a little rough in spots, but not enough to distract from the theme of the story.

Thanks

The story was ok but you need a LOT of help with sentence structure. I found it very distracting.

fuck you idiots that had something negative to say about this story. i enjoyed it and didn't care about the faulty sentence structure. you people probably wouldn't know a good erotic story if it came and fucked you in the puss.

Don't worry about them Mona, you write hot stuff. You're definitely one dirty fucking slut of a wife though! How I wish it were me fucking you to impregnation - and your lucky father in law got to fuck your arse, Wow!!

xx Ken

I have some similar incident in my life where I fucked a younger girl same way as the father in law mentioned in the story

I would love to impregnate my daughter in law! She is sooo hot and sexy! I would love to watch her belly grow with MY baby inside her! I would love to shoot my cum down her throat and have her enjoy swallowing it!

I was unable to keep track of what was going on due to poor sentence structure and bad grammar.

You are a rrally pretty woman amd i would love to be with you rmail mr samhop42@gmail.com

The subject matter could be hot and erotic, but the writing style is really poor and sounds like the writer doesn't speak English or is mentally deficient. The lack of good writing ruins the story.

poorly written

You have many grammar errors, and your story does not flow as it should. needs some work

An interesting and hot story. FIL and DIL sex can be very very intense and in this case; her father-in-law did the job very well. Hopefully, there will be a part 2 where the FIL and DIL can spend more quality time and she will try out sexual things she never got the chance to with her husband. Maybe her best girlfriend will join in ?? Thank you.

Wonderful he got the sex he wanted from a much younger woman who enjoyed his mature penis. Clearly better endowed and no sign of erectile dysfunction he gave her experience that his son did not. Taking her anally was a big step and once he had done this she has submitted to him. It flows naturally that she enjoys his mature cock and he should now share her with some of his mature friends to expand her sexual experience and have her enjoy being penetrated orally anally and vaginal probably things her husband would never consider. I know i did when i started having sex with my dads best friend he open many doors for me as a young girl and i enjoyed every time and my first time with him and some of his friends. I am now in my mid twentys and still have mature men to enjoy sex with anytime i feel horny which can be often. The sex is different to guys my age and i enjoy it as much as the first time an older man was between my thighs taking me. Lots of happy times love Angel xo