A Respectable Lady Like Lauren Ch. 01

Good beginning

Nice pacing and good narrative. I look forward to the next installment.

did I miss something?

seems like there was a huge jump in the storyline.....or is it just me?

Hot!! Erotic realism at its best

The characters all remind me of people I know in my own life (although I don't know their sexual secrets.) I could identify with each one and feel the eroticism as I pictured them in their roles in the story. I've read all of the stories you've posted and been thoroughly aroused by every one. I think it is that your characters are so believable that reels me in each time. I don't understand the silly comments from the anonymous creature who acts so outraged when authors submit their work clearly labelled as to its contents. The erotic stories are why we are all here. If he doesn't enjoy it why does he come here. Anyway, Thank you for your great stories. I know you said one of them is non fiction. My wife and I have been having a debate as to which one it is. I think its either An Aberration in Trust or this one.

Five Stars

I hope there are several more chapters to this story.
I read it through twice and love the way your characters react.
Theres a tension that builds into some of the hottest sex I've read on this or any other site. We are waiting not so patiently for the next installment.

Smoothly created first chapter

She is obviously doing imoral thingys but she is so sexy....

Love it! Very Real

I love the way Laura is pampered and protected by Dan yet she cheats wantonly with Todd. I can't wait to see her helpless and struggling with Murdoch now that she has stumbled into his grasp.

No waste of words.....but

for the title. Um, Bitch works.

I think I read a different story than most commenters XD

Nothing original , blury discriptions and a high and mighty attitude. Yeah , it sucked...

Well written but....

....not horribly gripping....

Very Enjoyable

I like the way you write very much. Each one of your stories has a way of drawing the reader in to identify your characters with real life. The sex is hot and the people although flawed are nonetheless appealing. I'm looking forward to Chapters two, three and more as this story has legs (two of which are the lovely Lauren's).

My sister-in-law

Lauren sounds just like my sister-in-law.

Pent up and Ripe for the taking

So many women like Laura have got a killer body but are locked in a stupid lie pretending to be what they aren't cut out to be. This bitch is in heat and she's pissed because Murdoch can see it. The women in your stories are hot and you make them real. It's like somebody I know and would want to fuck.

Brought out the Inner Whore

Good job Urban. I like the way she changed from snooty bitch to super hot
once he showed her for what she was.

Bravo. Another spectacularly horny episode from real life,

Lauren is another triumph. I'm a big fan of your deliciously tempting women that seem so natural and believable in the context of the stories you create. I can't speak for all of your readers but for me she represents someone I know, someone with the same attributes and annoying snobbiness. When she paints her own destiny and has to live with the consequences it is a joy. I confess to thoroughly enjoying seeing her debauched and brought to heel.

I love your stories

I have sexual fantasies like most normal women but I lack the courage to act on them. Your stories provide that special ingredient, the excuse that turns each woman loose to indulge the fantasy. "I had to do it or else" provides the deniability that makes it all ok. I love it and have read all of your stories several times. Please keep writing. You're providing enjoyment to a great many women such as myself and I'm sure the guys are enjoying it for different reasons but just as much.

A Lady Like Lauren by PDMM on ASSTR

Hmmm...

Everybody knows a bitchy broad like Lauren

Their up tight and frustrated and waitng for a guy like Murdoch to get into their pants so the inner whore can come out to play.

WHERE'S THE SEQUAL???

WONDERFUL STORY, AND YES WE ALL KNOW A LAUREN OR 2. IT'S SUCH FUN TO MAKE THEM SUBMIT. THEY ALL ACT LIKE THEY HATE IT, BUT FROM THEIR ACTIONS, YOU REALIZE THAT THEY HAVE A PERVERSE, KINKY SIDE, AND THAT THEY APPRECIATE BEING ABLE TO GET OFF HARD, WITHOUT BETRAYING THEIR GOODY-GOODY SIDE. THEY ALL FEEL THAT NOBODY KNOWS THEIR SECRET, BUT THEY ARE ALWAYS WILLING TO BE PUT IN THAT POSITION AGAIN. SUCH FUN

We DON'T need a sequel !

There is enough shit floating on this site !!!

Stories from real life

Real good story with compelling characters. Murdoch is a reprobate for sure but he's an appealing reprobate. Lauren is an iceberg woman who turns out to have a furnace between her legs. I read in the other comments that we all know somebody like Lauren and its true. My neighbor has the body of a goddess but was the prude of all time until I saw her swapping spit with her boss at an airport bar. She didn't see me until I'd already seen too much. Then she was all tears and promises begging me to keep it all to myself. That was three summers ago and she has been showing her gratitude ever since.
I love your stories Urban_legend555 and will read everything you post. This one's a 5 and I can't wait to read more.

Fucking lowlife douchebag brother.

First, Dan had EVERY right to tell his pissant brother to respect his wife and him.

Neither knew she was a cheating cunt yet. The brother was acting like scum.

Then he proved his character by instead of telling Dan what she was doing, plans on getting to fuck her and betraying his brother more.

With a brother like that scumbucket, who needs enemies!