Well, JPB. Another of your stories that pasted me by without any feelings for anyone in the story. If a marriage is over then it's over, don't carry on just for the sake of appearences. The wife should have ended the marriage long ago.
Funny, she set out to do one thing and got another.
I know that Bob does not read out comments, but being old I cannot keep from sharing that half way through this one I got a strong feeling that this one was written by a gal and therefore would close on a happy note. No I am not trying to diss JPB, it was just a reaction to what read like something out of a woman's magazine. Perhaps he was even thinking along these lines when he wrote this! I bet he could sell this one.
When one partner has cheated, the other should do his his or her best to never take the chance of catching anything from the cheater. I enjoyed this story though.
the narrative is bad its like this was /is a LIFETIME FOR WOMEN MOVIE.... no man in the year 2010 actually says this
...."What the fuck does that have to do with anything? I'm a man and all men play on the side. You are my wife and you are supposed to keep yourself for me...."
The doctor put you on Prozac or something. What's with all these touchy feely stories. I'm telling you, if you're not careful you're going to be writing romance novels pretty soon. Great Story I really enjoyed it. A bit surprised at the direction your story lines are taking but not as surprised as I was when I saw that 3Ps and Harry V were actually agreeing on something. Thanks Bob, excellent story, I really enjoyed it.
DW shithead, you damn idiot,you would not recognize excellent story if it kicked you in the balls.
It amazes me that cretin of your ilk is even capable to wipe your ass. And what really staggers me that you publish your deficiencies so all the world know what an excrement you are. Nuf said as one of my favored commenters says.
So a cheated woman decides to get even and ends up finding the real deal. A jerk of a husband gets cucked and doesn't like it. A happy single man meets a married woman and ends up in love. It all ended well. What's not to like?
Everyone (including you) is certainly entitled to you opinion, and obviously you have to read something before you can know if you like it or not.
But when someone like JPB has written as many stories as he has, and you detest as many as you do, why do you keep reading them?
While it's true that even a blind squirrel can sometimes find a nut, it is also true that the definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result.
Accept the fact that you don't like JPB's stories and look elsewhere.
I don't like cuck stories, so when I see one, I just give it a 1 * and move on.
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Anonymous09/28/15
KarenE! Ya gotta give Harry a break!
He is famous for hating everything anybody ever wrote. Except for Bonnietaylor2 he's the worst commentator on this entire site. But the rest of us have come to realize he's
crazy as a loon and we mostly ignore him. As for this story Bob just went a little crazy with his cuckold having so many lovers. As for her, why would Rob want to marry a woman whom he knows cheats on her husband - for whatever reason?
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Anonymous02/11/16
1* For The Cheaters!
Rob played with married women, the lowest form of male life on the planet. Minnie cheated on Brad, making her a slut and a cheater. If she didn't like Brads cheating on her it's time to get a divorce! A revenge/grudge fuck/affair just makes the spouse as low life as the one cheating on them.
Just My Opinion, YMMV.
She should've really fucked him over.maybe get the worthless asshole in trouble at work. Find Alice's fiance and let him know and hope he gets the shit out of his asshole.
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Anonymous01/02/17
As Far As They Go
Considering the main characters in the story, none of them were worth killin', as the saying goes. They were all cheaters, and by definition a cheater is a liar, and by my understanding a liar is a thief. So in my mind all the major characters in this story were thieves, liars and cheaters. In other words, the scum of the earth. And since I am neither uplifted nor entertained by stories about low-life scum, I can only give this story 1 star. Have a nice day.
English
Well, JPB. Another of your stories that pasted me by without any feelings for anyone in the story. If a marriage is over then it's over, don't carry on just for the sake of appearences. The wife should have ended the marriage long ago.
Funny, she set out to do one thing and got another.
I know that Bob does not read out comments, but being old I cannot keep from sharing that half way through this one I got a strong feeling that this one was written by a gal and therefore would close on a happy note. No I am not trying to diss JPB, it was just a reaction to what read like something out of a woman's magazine. Perhaps he was even thinking along these lines when he wrote this! I bet he could sell this one.
I agree with Poison.
When one partner has cheated, the other should do his his or her best to never take the chance of catching anything from the cheater. I enjoyed this story though.
Excellent!
Great job.
Well done and well written
Hot and fast sex. and just a good easy reading story.
Thanks
Good job Bob.
Liked it. Am glad that someone finally wrote one from the womans viewpoint.
Good to see the cheating husband get his comeuppence.
cliche to the nth degree YAWN.....
the narrative is bad its like this was /is a LIFETIME FOR WOMEN MOVIE.... no man in the year 2010 actually says this
...."What the fuck does that have to do with anything? I'm a man and all men play on the side. You are my wife and you are supposed to keep yourself for me...."
Harry right...
...this dumb....
HEY BOB!!!!!!!!!
I like this one a lot!!!!
JPB must have been off the meds to craft this pathetic submission while taking a dump.
JPB - has your buddies MattW & www worn out the knee pads from the cock-sucking they do for you? Once again, at least your consistently shitty.
good JPB
Just Plain Bob writes several kinds of stories (almost all well-written, btw):
certain stories require a strong stomach to read through to the end
some stories offend one's sense of morals but make internal sense
some stories he seems to throw as a bone to the LW nazis who love to hate Just Plain Bob and most other LW writers
and some stories are just good stories. This is one. It showed a realistic response to cheating, and it showed a realistic final outcome.
good stuff
What's the deal Bob!
The doctor put you on Prozac or something. What's with all these touchy feely stories. I'm telling you, if you're not careful you're going to be writing romance novels pretty soon. Great Story I really enjoyed it. A bit surprised at the direction your story lines are taking but not as surprised as I was when I saw that 3Ps and Harry V were actually agreeing on something. Thanks Bob, excellent story, I really enjoyed it.
Not realistic
DW shithead, you damn idiot,you would not recognize excellent story if it kicked you in the balls.
It amazes me that cretin of your ilk is even capable to wipe your ass. And what really staggers me that you publish your deficiencies so all the world know what an excrement you are. Nuf said as one of my favored commenters says.
Enjoyed it
She was justified in what she did. The husbands character was simply a prop in the storyline.
Too many oddball comments for me...
So a cheated woman decides to get even and ends up finding the real deal. A jerk of a husband gets cucked and doesn't like it. A happy single man meets a married woman and ends up in love. It all ended well. What's not to like?
Good One
Brad was just laughable.
@Harryin VA
Everyone (including you) is certainly entitled to you opinion, and obviously you have to read something before you can know if you like it or not.
But when someone like JPB has written as many stories as he has, and you detest as many as you do, why do you keep reading them?
While it's true that even a blind squirrel can sometimes find a nut, it is also true that the definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result.
Accept the fact that you don't like JPB's stories and look elsewhere.
I don't like cuck stories, so when I see one, I just give it a 1 * and move on.
KarenE! Ya gotta give Harry a break!
He is famous for hating everything anybody ever wrote. Except for Bonnietaylor2 he's the worst commentator on this entire site. But the rest of us have come to realize he's
crazy as a loon and we mostly ignore him. As for this story Bob just went a little crazy with his cuckold having so many lovers. As for her, why would Rob want to marry a woman whom he knows cheats on her husband - for whatever reason?
1* For The Cheaters!
Rob played with married women, the lowest form of male life on the planet. Minnie cheated on Brad, making her a slut and a cheater. If she didn't like Brads cheating on her it's time to get a divorce! A revenge/grudge fuck/affair just makes the spouse as low life as the one cheating on them.
Just My Opinion, YMMV.
Good story
She should've really fucked him over.maybe get the worthless asshole in trouble at work. Find Alice's fiance and let him know and hope he gets the shit out of his asshole.
As Far As They Go
Considering the main characters in the story, none of them were worth killin', as the saying goes. They were all cheaters, and by definition a cheater is a liar, and by my understanding a liar is a thief. So in my mind all the major characters in this story were thieves, liars and cheaters. In other words, the scum of the earth. And since I am neither uplifted nor entertained by stories about low-life scum, I can only give this story 1 star. Have a nice day.
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