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Not My Type: Adele Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by cpm0904/26/10

Nate..

what a wonderful man. I am really enjoying this story. how fast can u post next chapter?

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by Lakergirl04/26/10

Great chapter

You do have a knack for us (or at least me) to pop Lilly in the back of the head. lol. One thing is each part in the series seems to get better. I love Rhi much more than Lilly and not Adele's story is running a neck n neck race with Rhi. Keep writing and can't wait to see more of Nate

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by trinisampler04/26/10

typical

Lilly and Rhi now Adele...you have me hooked ,can't wait for more and i love the little twist with adam and lilly it is kinda funny, keep up the good work!!!!

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by Anonymous04/26/10

Can't wait for the next installation.. But there's one thing I don't get, why is Adele so hesitant about Nate?

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by Anonymous04/26/10

Love it!!

Can't wait for Ch 3!!!

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by MissWizz04/27/10

Love it!

waiting expectantly for ch.3

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by Anonymous04/27/10

I love Adele :)

I'm loving the drama and the duality of Adele's and Nate's fellings for each other. So far she's my favorite in "Not MyTtype" series. great work and please post soon!
Mara - Portugal

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by PatientlyWaiting04/28/10

SO MEAN...

leaving us hanging like that! I hope the next chapter is posted soon!

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by PrincessErin04/28/10

Wow

Thank you once again for the great chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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by gainsaywhodare04/28/10

The anticipation ...

is KILLING ME! Here I am at the edge of my seat, my eyes glued to the monitor, yelling "Kiss her! Kiss her!". They've got to do something! Please, will somebody kiss somebody already?!

The anticipation in your story is too great and it is killing me that I couldn't skip to read the last chapter! Honey, once again you wrote such a beautiful story and here I am fidgeting in my seat wanting to have more! Please finish this up soon and put me out of my misery!

Just a comment though. Before you start on Felicity, do you think you could perhaps get back to Imogen and Sim first? They really need some closure. Oh yes, they do. Anyhow Ch. 03, next!

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by cpm0904/28/10

awesome!

I just love anything you write! Perfect!

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by MugsyB04/29/10

Darn it!

Oh, what a spot to leave it at. I wish the next chapter was already up. Good work and can't wait to see more!

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by MollyDolly05/01/10

So lovely!

You are one of my absolute favourite writers, and I often reread your previous works. I'm so glad to see you posting again, and I can't wait to finish Adele's story! Thank you, FK :)

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by Anonymous05/01/10

Oh my gosh

I think I was literally about to fall off my chair when I read the end of this chapter. Thank you for updating this story. Cannot wait to the next update.

Thanks so much for your brillance.

Megan

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by Anonymous05/07/10

YAY!

I'm so excited you are posting again, I look forward to everything you write!

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by Anonymous10/16/15

A suggestion

Please consider the use of "the Reverend ". It is like saying "the respected". A Presbyterian minister might use I'm the Reverend Mr. Jones" but that is like saying "you should respect me" in so may words. A minister would say "the minister who was here before me" but I don't think he or she would say "the Reverend who ...". It might be common usage in a community but I suggest that the minister him or herself would not use ""the reverend" in referring to him or herself or to colleagues.

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by Parttimereader04/28/16

Long service

Very unpresbyterian.

Started at 930 and after congregation leaves, which can take a while but not 3 hours, it's time for lunch.

Most pressy services I've attended last about an hour.

Just being picky - sorry :-)

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