And, if you are looking for erotica, well, you were surely disappointed. But if you were looking for a well crafted tale, a story that has an interesting twist at the end and a story that reveals so much about the human condition then you have found it here! I'm jealous
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WOW Girl
Loved the ending. I was wondering when this might happen in one of your story's. Looking forward to the next one.
Your are a great writer and I have enjoyed all your tales with adventure and imagination you bring with it.
Five plus.
The sting in the tale
is perfect for a perfect gem of a story. Thank you.
I could have done without it...
and thought, after having read it, that it was a pointless exercise.
Not erotic at all!
And, if you are looking for erotica, well, you were surely disappointed. But if you were looking for a well crafted tale, a story that has an interesting twist at the end and a story that reveals so much about the human condition then you have found it here! I'm jealous
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