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by Pistolpackinpete04/29/10

Good writing, Jimbo can't be....

....what most women that age want. (A man with GOALS and OBJECTIVES,-- as long as those create a better more comfortable agenda fitting life for them.) Does that sound bitter? Weird, "my" woman's a loyal loving enabler, a fellow observer. Storyteller, re: your note. You must have read my mind but this is a tough task, to write of loyalty and altruism, love and benevolence turned consciously to self indulgence, self aggrandizement and unfettered licentiousness. It can't be like most stupid stories in this vein, juvenile squirt tales with transformation occurring without reason, purely out of lust. Lust fades quicker than a fireflies tail and convincingly pure corruption only foments after the edifice of civility sufficiently crumbled.Bon Voyage' !!!

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by StoryTeller0704/30/10

A challenge?

I might not be up to the challenge but wiling to try! I would need your anger and 'views' to make it bite. I know you wouldn't hold back your opinion and that would be welcome to produce something 'meaningful'. Send me an email with a rough list of content and I'll take it from there, then email you the first draft. I'm thinking to write a nice every day story then open a pit for them both to fall into where they revel in throwing away the restraints of society. sorryteller07

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