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good but fast
why was lucas such an ass, would love to know that, and other than that great story
Rushed,but good
It was a little on the fast side,i think a few more chapters to explain why lucas had an attitude at first,and then progress a bit more slowly,with longer chapters,,but it was a very good read,,,ty,hope to.read more from you soon.I did enjoy it very much,keep up the good work.
so cute!
I absolutely loved it!
So absolutely beautiful!
What a great story! I absolutely loved it and thought you built it up quite well. It was definetely one of the best stories I have ever read on this website. Bravo!!!!
hmm
im undecided, i liked the general plot line and all your ideas, but i can't say i felt like i knew the characters. it was too rushed and ever the two main people weren't properly developed. we know nothing about lucas except that he was angry and then suddenly in love, same with grace only change angry to sad.
all that said i still liked the story, just needed more to it
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