All Comments on 'More Than Just a Fairy Tale'

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I_M_PatientI_M_Patientalmost 14 years ago
A different twist on the old tale...

Well done. There will be a part 2, right?

JaisenJaisenalmost 14 years agoAuthor

Yes, there will be a second part. You'll just have to wait a bit. LOL

angelx602angelx602almost 14 years ago
That was great!

It was so romantic and I was so glad when she stopped freaking out and went back to the tent with him. I cannot wait to read more. Greeat job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
:)

great story, but whos kate?

JaisenJaisenover 13 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous

I have to admit that you are the first one to catch that little goof! I changed the character's name about 2 pages in and missed that one. Hope you enjoy the series.

ushergalushergalabout 13 years ago

individually the stories are good but when you put them all together they are one of the greatest stories on the site and I for one do not want this story to end even though you might end Luke and Meg's storie but it feel it can go on for all their life

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
ha

yeah lol, who's kate?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
????

Who is Kate??? @}-,-'-

JaisenJaisenover 12 years agoAuthor
The Kate issue

Look up a few comments... all is explained. :)

ThunderPrincessThunderPrincessover 11 years ago
Thanks

I Find i really enjoyed this story! So Far it is amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story plot.

Nice start but you needs an editor or three.

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