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Holy cow.
The way you create chemistry between your characters is amazing. This is such a sweet story but the underlying tension between Adele and Nate is so strong and believable. I was so excited to see a new chapter and I put my own writing on hold just to read it. Thanks so much for the latest and I can't wait to see more.
I love it!
I am really feeling for Adele..You write beautifully. Than you so much!
Beautiful
Your stories are so beautifully written with such care for emotion and passion. thank you for writing - and please keep them coming! I can't wait for the next chapters!
yay!
so glad to see the chapters coming through regularly, I'm loving the intensity of the characters and the delicate beauty of the story.
The Scarlet Letter
Love the reference to "scarlet letter" and I can see Mrs. Macintyre will give them some trouble. Also, the way you are building up Nate's caracter is simply amazing :) please post soon!
Mara -Portugal
perfect
I love reading everything you've written. You pace the stories well, develop the characters, give them flaws. I feel like I've met (and fallen in love) with everyone and that if I met any of them at the corner store, I could introduce myself.
Bravo.
Lisa
ditto
i agree that it is perfect, nates thoughts on pre marital sex sounds like a clergyman i know and the fact that both of them are on pins and needles sounds so true that i cannot wait for the next chapter
Simply Perfect
Your love stories, and they are love stories, are simply beautiful. I was so happy to see you continue and feel so blessed that you have shared your amazing talent with us. Your characters are real, they hurt and laugh and love, and stay true to their hopes and beliefs. You make me believe in happily ever afters.... and I know that Adele and Nate will have their happily forever after....thank you
Wonderful, again!
I've been reading your stories for a long while, and I was so thrilled to see a new one! Every one of them has been a delight and this one is no exception. You are exceptional!
Wonderful
I got so excited to see your next chapter and the fact it is set in Canada is wonderful.
Beautiful Writing
I just found Not my Type the other day and have finally read all the chapters to date. I'm really loving your writing. The whole Tanner family thing has had me crying, laughing and smiling and Adeles story is developing into something so touching.
Can't wait for the next chapter keep it up :)
Sol xxx
I need more . . .
to fuel my addiction, love you're writing so much, keep up the fantasmagorical work 'sigh'
Of Course Not, Dear
Because he has already shown himself to be a person of excellent character who deeply cares about her feelings.
I'm absolutely hooked
on this beautiful story.
Presbyter
Of course a presbyter is a priest -- the leader of the ritual of the church. So your comparison is really with a Roman Catholic priest, who somehow was made to be celibate - but not from the beginning.
Lovely story :)
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