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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/02/10

Absolutely awesome. I want more.

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by digdaddyrich05/02/10

damn good start and a first time poster to boot.

I can visualize three hot women and one young stud getting all of the pussy he can handle for the whole weekend.

Hope to see more soon, thanks for the good read.

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by Psionic_X05/03/10

Great start!

This was a really great start! Post more soon!

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by Turbulence197305/05/10

Great Start

This started with a nice lead in and then excellently dived into the story. I truly hope you continue this storyline.

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by Anonymous05/06/10

SOOO HOT

This is a dirty, dirty story and I love it.

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by Anonymous05/07/10

So hot. I cant wait to read more. My pussy is twitching for me.

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by Ysdira05/10/10

grammar, punctuation

Very good story line, erotic but suggest reading the story once again for typos, grammar errors and punctuation.
such as the sentence that reads I stared ...
Anna gave her (word is missing) stare...
Anyway story is too long for me to edit. I have finals next week.
Very good story line, erotic. but suggest someone should proof this for you.
thanks for sharing.

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by hours05/10/10

more

I love ass to mouth stories !

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by incense05/21/10

ass love

excellent beginning.i love ass licking and sniffing, particularly a mature motherly anus!!!

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by walkingeagle07/25/10

another great story!

Your stories are all wonderful!

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by Anonymous02/22/12

My favorite line...

"I could hear her asshole stretching as her butt tried to swallow my cock."

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by Anonymous01/12/13

VERY EXCITING WRITING

LOved the story, look for the next xhapter.-EATANDBEMERRY-69

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by Anonymous06/04/13

My girlfriend Sandra is my tennis partner for a midweek social comp..Her mum,June said Sandra was not well so if i still wanted to play she would partner me.Fine,i picked
her up,we played o.k.but playing doubles i would look at her,she has quite a large bottom,her panties stretched over it, i missed a few shots.As i drove her back,we laughed,we were both hot and she asked could she shower at my flat instead of disturbing her daughter.I said,look i will get the shower going for you,the taps can be a bit fiddly,so i got it about right and walked out and she was leaning over,her panties off,pulling down her socks,i stared,my cock hardening and she turned and caught me,i quickly walked away,went to my room,as she went to the shower,my cock was semi hard,then i heard her voice,can you help me with the water.I walked in,it felt cool,i only had my shorts on,i reached for the taps,take them off,what,your shorts dont want to get them wet,i slid them down,my cock springing out,i tried to cover up,she looked at me,nice,touching me,Sandra was right,what,she said you had a nice cock now squeezing me,hard too,what else did she say,said you liked to put it there, slightly turning and pointing to her bottom,i went quiet,leaning back against the wall,my cock sticking up,she held up my tube of lube,bent over,her hole shiny already with lube,i dropped 2 blobs on my cock she reached back and positioned my cock and i pushed forward,her bottom opening for me,i held still but she pushed back against me sliding her bottom over my cock until i was deep inside her.I held her against me and moved my cock in and out of her tight bottom,i started to fuck really fast,about to cumm,when she pulled away and turned and took my cock into her mouth which i filled straight away,oh so good.Now we can shower,she washed me clean,then leaned back against the wall,her legs open and said lick me,now please.i got down and bought her to orgasm,her legs closing around my head.My wife Sandra and i live with her mum June,great arrangement.

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by jonyoungau02/01/15

She sounds like a very hot lady.

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