All Comments on 'When Moonlight Shines Ch. 04'

by JayCMiller

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
great

this is simply amazing plz write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
i love it

please keep writing itt, i relly like itt :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Awsome writting, with a great story and great passion. Keep on writting dude!

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 14 years ago
funny and cute!

I hope you post another chapter soon, this is such a fun story to read!

JayCMillerJayCMilleralmost 14 years agoAuthor

Ch. 05 has gone through a few different edits but I should have it done by the end of the week.

thedemonIxthedemonIxabout 7 years ago
kitschy. ..

Bendy is trendy, dear...

But "Vamp" is camp...

On with the next chapter... I hope there is a bit more smut...

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