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When Moonlight Shines Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/23/10

great

this is simply amazing plz write more

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by Anonymous06/04/10

i love it

please keep writing itt, i relly like itt :)

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by Anonymous06/07/10

Awsome writting, with a great story and great passion. Keep on writting dude!

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by nomoretears0006/07/10

funny and cute!

I hope you post another chapter soon, this is such a fun story to read!

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by JayCMiller06/08/10

Ch. 05 has gone through a few different edits but I should have it done by the end of the week.

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