All Comments on 'The Reluctant Sacrifice'

Excellent

love it..will there be another chapter?

I sure hope there will be another chapter to this. I really want to know what will happen between them.

I've always loved Ares and you did NOT disappoint! Keep it up!

and rushed to me. If there is another chapter, I hope it moves more slowly.

JUST NOT SURE WHAT, BUT IT IS PROMISING

I peeked at the erotic peaks of the breasts of the woman that had piqued my interest. the sight of her had me dancing on site.

the above might give you a clue or two.

I never really understood why some people needed absolutely perfect spelling, punctuation, and grammar to read a story. Even then, they tend to be rude to the author. Personally, I love this story. It could use a little editing. I just hope that there is more coming.

I like the literary drooling over Ares' body

This looks like a series in the making.

Overall, I liked the story. There were some incongruous phrases ("uh...yeah..." kind of jumped out at me as not fitting with the story), and the ending was rather abrupt (unless you plan to make it into a series).

yes! there should be more to this story!!!

Please make this into a story, as the beginning has started out awesome!! :)

Please make this a long story! It's very well done and amazing. Please continue this..

Please continue the story it started out amazing!

no chapter 2??? ohhhhh noooooo, excellent start though

So, please continue with it, its off to a fantastic start! =)

You should be careful about switching between third and first person, as that can confuse some readers. But on the whole, a good story.