All Comments on 'Young Wolves Ch. 02'

I have to say that so far i am captivated by the story. It can go in so many directions and it has great potential. I hope you want to keep writing chapter after chapter. I keep asking myself if I was Cameron who who I want to turn myself? My sister? As an alpha he would mate her. Sarah? Can Jen now share her Alpha? Just a few questions I see comming up. I thank you for such a good story. I too am impatient for the next chaper or 6.

Awesome follow up chapter love where is going can't wait for more. Thank u for sharing Mechmanas

Finally a NonHuman story that's fun and actually readable. Cameron and Jenifer are fun and very likable characters. The love scene was fantastic. Can't wait to read more. Also can't wait until Jenifer explains the "in heat" thing.

....other than lots of dumb typos(?)- I like the mutual (telekinetic) lust thing and so far it's fairly sophisticated.

I'm loving Cameron even more. Really looking forward to reading how he progresses as he comes to terms with his new nature. I'm sure he's going to build into a pretty impressive Alpha. Great stuff!

but I want to say now, before I read the next few chapters, don't let him lose Sarah.

Just a feeling.

don't let him lose sarah if what jen said about her being a female opposite camaron the she would be the alpha female when he bites her

Sensual, erotic, innocent, tender, arousing, amazing, primal, This is what sexual attraction and fulfillment should be. In addition it gives me a writing standard to aspire to.

I'll take my time reading the series.

getting better with every word! hope you kept it up?

Still a good story...

Cameron is faced with a problem,he is now stuck between his love for Sarah,and the love Jenifer has for him and him now being her Alpha,but Cameron obviously can't tell Sarah that he is a Werewolf Alpha and he just fucked Jenifer to break her bond with Tyler because if Sarah finds out she is likely to kick Cameron to the curb for fucking Jenifer unless Cameron can convince Sarah he did it to free Jenifer from Tyler.

So like I said Cameron is in a pickle,can Sarah understand he did it not for pleasure but to save Jenifer?.This story is getting interesting.