I say it isn't cheating. Loved the imagery too. I wouldn't have any stories without my dreams, so I was glad to see this one up today.
....pov shifts, from present to past but it left me feeling disturbed, as cheating stories will,and wondering who? Why? More?
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from one dreamer to another,
I say it isn't cheating.
Loved the imagery too. I wouldn't have any stories without my dreams, so I was glad to see this one up today.
Pretty well written despite some awkward....
....pov shifts, from present to past but it left me feeling disturbed, as cheating stories will,and wondering who? Why? More?
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