When Worlds Collide Ch. 03

You never cease to amaze with your stories I can not wait for the next one!!!!

Oooo the plot thickens

I thought Graves was going to be a vampire so glad I was right :)
I reckon Jen has so gotta get together with Aaron to can you imagine the fireworks :0)
Also a great start to my holiday with the new chapter up Jazz well done.
Of course since I am on holiday I do think you should post the next chapter to keep me occupied (Big Pleading Smile).
Really can't wait to see the next chapter Jazz keep it up hun xxxx

Sol

HMMM

LIKE I HAVE SAID BEFORE , OF ALL THE CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY, THE ONE THAT I THINK WHEN IT COMES DOWN TO IT, THAT WOULD DESTROY ANYTHING IN HIS PATH TO PROTECT WHAT IS HIS IS RAFE , BECAUSE I THINK THAT PUSH COME TO SHOVE, HE WOULD BE , AND THE NORSE GAVE US THE WORD, A BEZERKER UNSTOPPABLE AND SINGLE MINDED. AND THE SECOND , FUNNY ENOUGH WOULD BE ANN, AS THEY SEEM TO BE WRITTEN AS THE SAME THING, PEACEABLE UNTIL RILED THEN COLD BLOOD AND CAPABLE , I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. AND YOU KEEP REFERENCING RAFES ALPHA ABILITY, THAT IS A ROUTE I WOULD LIKE TO SEE EXPLORED

*cracks the whip* more more, and the plot thickens.

can i borrow aaron for lis or mia? ;)

Holy hell!

The shit is about to hit the fan!! I'm so loving this story because its got all of them together and I love all these characters! Demitri is proving to be real hero as well. Can't wait for the next chapter *anxiously biting nails*

Love it!!!

You are amazing I am loving this chapter it has all my favourite characters in it and I really would love to see Jen hook up with Aaron! More soon please!

So ...

doing a little happy dance now !! Really impressed with this chapter :)

WOW

this chapter's even better than the last! can't wait for the next one!

LOVE IT!

I'll join the other person with a happy dance! *Does her jig*
I LOVE this chapter!!!! I'm so glad that they two are taking the news quite well. And I love it that Lacey is finally 'accepting' Rafe, well both sides of him. HEHEHE
OH I can' wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry please!!!

Love it!

Sometimes when authors pull previous characters into a new story it feels forced and cheesy. You, however, have done it in a smooth, seamless way. It feels like they are vital to the story and still are developing as characters instead of existing in stagnate bits. 5 stars for sure!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

WOWWWWWWW

You are amazing, i just loved this chapter, its so intense....waiting for the next one desperately.

I love Demetri!!!!

Great chapter... I love him so much!!! I know I sound psycho but that's just how great you base your characters... Keep the good work coming!!!!!!!!!!

Good...

This is nice! Your stories are always fun and cool!!!!

Wow

All I'm going to say is do not sleep on "I-Don't-Want-To-Be-Alpha" Rafe. Thanks for the update. Jen and Aaron????? :)

YAY!!

you did it again...you wrote another very good chapter! I shouldnt be this surprised, as all your chapters have beyond great! I cant wait for the next chapter. I should have checkd out the site EP. Oh well :)
Please i cant wait for the next chapter. I just love these characters so much! :) Goodluck with the next chapter(s).

Great as always

Great chapter and of course it just made us all want more! The sooner the better of course. Can't wait for the next chapter. So easy to get into your stories and identify with the characters.

Hooray!!

Hooray, another chapter! Excellent, as usual. Can't wait to find out what happens next..............

SWEET

I am so loving this story. The plot is spot on with the flow of the story. This is just awesome. Thank you for sharing Mechmanas

BRAVO

what a plot, great characters, I love your imagination and where it takes us. As always, will be checking daily for new chapters. Can not get enough fast enough

Kate

wow!

I never thought this about Dimitri. I am glad he is an ally and he is quite a confident one. love it!!! continue and i can't wait as more mystery unfolds... i wonder if Jen is Aaron's mate. hmmmm....

Oooooooo... *Standing Ovation*

You go, gurl!!! LOVING this story and I am so hooked!

PLEASE, p-l-e-a-s-e Jaz, don't let me (and the others, of course: I have to be nice and think about them too) have to wait an eternity for my next fix *insert puppy dog eye look here*

PS: And why are there ONLY 5 stars to give? You deserve at least 100! :)

Amazingly well done!

Your build up toward the coming war is first rate. Hats off to you!

How much is to much?

How much praise can you take? Girrrl Jaz, your writing is organic! No complicated outlines plotting everyone's trajectory and development? Yet, you come up with these amazing stories and characters. You allow the characters to speak and come to life. I take my hat off to you especially for recognizing creative constipation and clearing out the clog;-) Can't wait for the shit to hit the fan! I have no doubt I will love whatever you write. Personal experience has taught me that adversity brings forth strengths you never knew you had. Rafe will no be the better were for it.

more more more

it is great like normal please dont take to long with it if you do it has to be more than 3 pages :)

Solid

Solid piece of work. You too need to get this publish. You! IMHO has improved tremendously from the first two story.

At first I thought this was just another normal storyline where ex bf beat gf up and new bf save the day by taking out the 'human' ex bf which can be kinda boring but a great twist in it with the ex bf turning out to be a nasty centuries old vamp. Now that is a solid storyline!!! You go girl!!!

Love it!!

You have me waiting with baited breath for the next installment. This story is great keep up the good work.

Excellent......

..... chapter! EP has a glitch and I couldn't post like I normally would.....

Oh, I love it!

Cannot wait for more! Thanks for writing!

Story great... why so much time between submissions lately?

Since you have said you have many chapters already written, why the long delay between chapter 3 and 4. Your story "Fighting the Inevitable" had the chapters out just less that 5 days. All of your commentors love your stores; I'm sure we would like to see "When Worlds Collide" come out closer together so the story is fresher as each chapter emerges. Every day is not necessary, but 4-5 days like "Fighting..." would be great.

Great chapter! So the title is perfect since the different worlds of the vamps and wolves and all involved are colliding at once. I do LOVE the whole conversation at the end with Demetri. It is so true that he is best to deal with a bastard since we know he was a real bastard up until recently. He's probably their best hope/weapon. Hope that is enough to help the wolves too. I think Lacey should be a bit more freaked to feel a guy wanting to hold her close even if his intent isn't evil like Richard. Her trigger would be Rafe's need to control her (obviously any control would be his desire to protect her above all else but we know those instincts lead those men to be neanderthals) and well it should be freakin' her out. Maybe it's tempered by the feelings her side of the mating instinct is creating and you do a good job of conveying those. But I think a tiny bit of trepidation and resistance would be good...let it take time for her to be okay with this mating thing. You're good at letting things develop in a fair timetable. I loved when Caleb called Annie out on her 'parlor tricks'. I like the humor slipped in here and there. The fear that came over Caleb was real effective in letting us know how scary this Graves is. It was tempered with Demetri's confidence/arrogance. Hope you're writing the next story. Since I burned through almost all of yours during my sick day :) Can't wait to read on!

The Gangs All Here

Life owes Rafe happiness, and to see everyone come together in support of him will in the end benefit all. The fight for love is always a just fight.

i looovvve this story! but why do you call rafes sister annie and rhianna? i was completely confused!

I can't tell you...

...how stoked i am about this story. I love the fact that Richard is a worthy opponent. I hate it when the bad guy in a story doesn't stack up against the heroes.

F--------g AWESOME!!!

I'm reading these chapters like a junkie!!! :D

DANG!!!

In my lifetime I have probably read over 1000 books, I love to read but I have to say, I have NEVER been drawn into a story like this one. ITS REALLY GOOD> I mean really. I can't wait to keep reading!!!

addicted

i seriously just found out about your writing on Sunday night and haven't been able to stop reading since. you have a way with words hope you venture into publishing more stories as profession. you are much much better than stephanie meyer!

Damnnn

U got meh hooked more than anything on this story

ahh!!

I'm literally nervous about waht's gonna happen...my stomach actually hurts thinking about it...this is gonna be so good

there goes my revision! i'm now hooked :)

demetri

I always loved Demetri!

Just found these stories this week !

Holy Cow, How did I miss these??? Oh Ya, always in the Sci-Fi section... Dumb of me.
Now, Jaz, I gotta say, I love your style and your characters, Please Don't rip these all down for a bit longer, It will take me a while to read them all.

Ramjet

:)

Ahhhhh Demetri..... Love him!

i agree SouthenGirl30

Demitri indeed.......

Nuh uh.....

Gard. All the way, baby!

Woot!

Team Gard!! >.< lol