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A Daemon-Horn Blade Ch. 15

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by shortydee05/08/10

Awesome

Keep up the good work. This story is awesome

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by Anonymous05/08/10

this could really be a novel.

had to be expanded and cleaned up, but it has the story to make it a good one.

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by superfeluously_e08/24/14

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

My humble advice would be to include some dialogue between Rowan and the Foole. These two have become great friends and it seems the goblins story has made the Foole say next to nothing since. Surely Rowan would confront his friend that even if what the goblins said was true, they were still friends, and he still needs his counsel and advice...

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