All Comments on 'A Forever Love Ch. 06'

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catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
more please

now that Matthew's reasons for acting are known, he can become a valuable member of the household. and i do hope that he finds somthing to make him happy, as he sounds like a tortured soul , but a loving one

lildragonlildragonalmost 14 years ago
Perfect

Really enjoyed the ending to this story.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago
The best chap.

great chapter! I loved the way you brought in their pasts through the visions. I thought the vision when christian proved the point with the other vamps daughter was brilliant. it's so cute that Matthew will live with them, awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
:-)

I love this entire series

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love it but.............

You said in the last few lines that his mouth was hot and tongue 'a brand' while he's a vampire and it's established that he's a vampire and vampire's are icy cold. Love the story though, I'm totally hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Aww, you just made my day with this chapter! I love that Christian was willing to see some of what Matthew saw, as well as show him why he can say not all vampires are like that. I love that Matthew will be coming to stay with them, and hope he can find some peace and healing! - Theresa

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...

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