All Comments on 'Monster Under Her Bed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Nice story. I liked it. It's better than other stories involving monsters or what not under the bed...those stories always end with the girl dead...yuck..I hate those kind of stories.

More of your kind is better.

Thanks..

JD88JD88over 13 years ago

Great story! Wide open for continuation

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
damn juicy read!

It's a shame tentacle monsters don't appear beneath the beds of all willing women :D I loved your pace and juicy details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW!

Amazing. Simply Amazing. Continue writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Five stars

I read it. I loved it. I came.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yay

well done bruv

musclecargirlmusclecargirlabout 10 years ago
Wow!

This is great! You write well. Got me wet! ;p

fayebabyfayebabyover 9 years ago
Wet

Got me sloppy wet, what great story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nightmares?

She won't be having nightmares about his monster, she'll be having wet dreams. Well done really good story

zr07zr07over 7 years ago

ohhhh i love this. such a lucky girl.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
part 2!!

super hot please make a part two

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Agreeing with other anon

Yeah, with someone dead, howzat "erotic"( appealing to sex and sensuality,the continuance of life)?

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