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Very good story, Sad but good.
I would guess this story is more true than most people think. I can probably picture both men and women ending up like this character. Anyway thanks for writing the story. And good to see you back writing, it's been awhile.
very true
very well done . . a story that is both true and sad . . I have seen and followed this type of thing from personal experience . . my last ex was trailer park trash . . hot as hell looking, technically very proficient sexually, and a slut . . through occasional contact with my mother I have been following her "career" as a slut . . and to all appearances she is living this story . . only she hasnt reached the "retirement" age yet . . and the saddest part of it is that her own daughters will have been raised with THAT lifestyle as the example of womanhood they were taught
You know
you're not supposed to write something like this. its just too real. LOL.
Required reading
for sluts of both genders. Too bad we only think of the now. Your well-written tale is I am afraid just too true-to-life, and the future too many will face.
A Nice Sketch
Kind of a generic treatment of the conflicts between the self of the moment and the self of the future. Very good
Hahaha too bad old slut.
Who wants an old used up skank with a loose hangind down cunt, so stretched out some one that didn't care about getting a deadly disease could put his leg up in it..then she could get atheletes cunt..too ha ha ha. Not even mindless kids would fuck it..the only things she could get is niggers and they don't care what they fuck..
Amen to the Required Reading Comment!
It is hard to muster any sympathy for someone who was the author of their own destruction. Thus always to old sluts or old cheaters of either sex.
Very often less is more. A nicely crafted, short but yet concise story.
Sad but sheds light on the reality of some lives.
Clarity of reflection in a very true to life tale
You hit it out of the ballpark! The reality of your tale is a lesson to be learned for many. And for many this is their life as they have made it. The reflection in the mirror is this tale. What a sad one!
Thanks for writing!
On the other hand...
On the other hand, what becomes of an old
football player? What indeed becomes of an old
actress? An old dancer? Though we have no need
of them anymore, we "respect" them. Why then
is it we only curse the memories of women we
call sluts and whores with our toe-curling morality?
Re: Angiquesophies comment.
You are quite correct Angiquesophie, however, this story can be applied to say a male prostitute, or a male gigolo or any male equivalent to this female character in this story. Any male person that did the same things would be equally dismissed and equally ridiculed for what they did. Although you could argue that men tend to age better than some woman so the shelf life of a male gigolo would maybe be slightly longer than that of a female version. Besides this story is about a certain woman having regrets about what she has done or not done with her life, if you were this person would you have such regrets as she does? or would you just carry on and not think about what might have been?
Well done
A sad ending and story of a woman who made bad choices in her life and now must live with the consequences of those choices. A woman who never grew up or thought about anything but right now. Well right now isn't so good.
Good writing, good story, and a unique way at looking at this woman's history.
Thanks for your hard work.
How old are you Poizon?
Have you had a wank yet? O no of course you dont do sex do you is to beneath you. Pathic man and comment.
angiquesophie
Please explain to me why one should respect a woman who deserts her family to become eye candy on the arms of wealth men. Men who regard her as nothing but a piece of meat to be used and discarded for a newer model when the time comes. In my eyes people earn respect and the woman in this sad tale gets none from me. The same would holds true of the men that treat women this way.
Angioplasty must be on serious Dutch "Coffee"....
....to find comparability in the football player to the slut.(Sorry that was too easy!)
I mean "and "
....the slut.
To Anonymous with the Poizon comment.
Anonymous you show your intelligence or lack thereof by your comment. The story was good except you probably didn't get enough real sex to jack off to in the closet.
Beautifuly written. I found it a bit short though. The messsage would have hit home harder if it was a bit longer. Good piece of work
Beautiful, well-written piece and I'm impressed by how you've kept this woman true to who she is (a warm body whose purpose is having sex with other men) while also portraying her as a woman who deeply regrets leaving her old life.
angiquesophie,
Respecting a sacrifice is different from respecting the person who makes said sacrifice. I am a sports fan, so I respect the fact that NFL players sacrifice their bodies to play, on average, three years and then are done with their career. That doesn't mean I respect the actual player, just what he was willing to give. I can respect how much this "old slut" was willing to get where she is, but I will NEVER respect a woman who abandoned a husband who loved her and her children.
Good heavens!
A wise story, and geriatric! What is Literotica coming to?
5 stars
First at all, somebody who abandon his/her children and family she/he do not wonder , that the family centered majority do not like them and when he/she become old this feeling will not change.
Second for such an old whore to find a long lasting connection is very difficult, there is a woman surplus age group (we male people die earlier than the women do) so for her the sad loneliness will remain in high likelyhood.
Third SS06 has a similar story, but the old woman try a reconcilation with her first husband, who became widover.
Best Writer
You may be the best writer on this site. I have read a lot and you are great.
I know a guy like this
Fool threw away the love of a good woman for a string of skanks
outstanding
One of the must read stories in LW.
object lesson
Every woman on here who wants to be a cheatin ho bag needs to read this story!!!!
WOW! What a snapshot of regret !!
Absolutely wonderful and unique story. Very sad and heartfelt character one I unexpectantly took pity on.
Damn
Excellent portrayal of an old slut. Actually this could be anyone who deserts their family for greener pastures. All should suffer.
REMORSE AND REGRET
the curse of outliving our memories, TK U MLJ LV NV
Read it again
I read this again after meeting a woman I knew 25 years ago. She could be the woman in your story. She may not have been as big a slut, but she did cheat on her husband, get divorced and bounced from man to man while traveling around the world on an 25 year ego trip. In her case, she never had children, That is both a blessing and a curse. Your character might one day thank God that she had kids and her life was not a total waste. The woman I know will die one day leaving nothing and no one behind.
Enjoyed it
Very well done. Five stars.
Great and Thought Provoking Story!
This is a real powerful story. This should be mandatory reading for all those young women thinking of cheating, of looking for excitement, being lonely and bored, feeling ignored, etc,etc. (all the cheating excuses). This is written from the female perspective but it also true if the main character is a man. I could actually feel her remorse and regret. Thank You.
OMFG
Youth is wasted on the YOUNG, moron. Jesus!
Jeezzz...
Anon 3/10/16... Chill. If the only thing you got from the story was your correction of an obvious mistake, you need to reread it.
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