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Promising Danielle Ch. 02

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by photographer05/10/10

I had a similar experience

I relate totally to what's going on here, as I also took in an emotionally broken young woman into my house and my life. No need for details - suffice it to say, she's still with me after a long and painful healing period.

Keep up the good work.

I sincerely hope that Danielle's horrors aren't as bad I suspect they're going to be.

I look forward to the next episode. Well done.

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by Anonymous05/10/10

Just read the series. Character development is well done and very believable. I appreciate the story structure built around the characters as well as the back story. The detail of the Post HS Transition is also very true. The interactions between the two primary characters is very human in its developing friendship and basic good natured altruism. I like where you are taking the story. So far your instincts/talents are serving you very well indeed. Keep them rolling. Well done.

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by ElleMunro7805/11/10

Wonderful...

I love it, am very much looking forward to the rest of the series!

Good job

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by Zachswife12/26/12

Awwww!!!!

I love this!
I love the paragraph with the rhetorical questions asking what he could do to stop her tears! So sweet!!

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