All Comments on 'How I Became a Cuckold Ch. 04'

by LynnGKS

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BobNbobbiBobNbobbialmost 14 years ago
The End?

I am guessing here, but this seems like a quite logical stopping point. You could go on, but the story would probably get bizarre. I liked the way it flowed and the soft love of the "lesser" lover is just perfect for some women. The twists at the end were delicious.

You have told a first rate, fun story. Thanks and praise to you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow!

I loved this... the car fucking ... then the 'turn around'!! Mmmm

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioalmost 14 years ago
Nice to see a little equality in their marriage.

Pretty well-written, flowed easily, and the humor was nice too. Thanks for writing.

Kickinback54Kickinback54almost 14 years ago
Turn About is Fair Play

I loved how you took the story and turned it around so that the cuckhold turned the tables on the bull. And that you added Carol into the mix...making both of your "heroes" bi. Simply delicious.

stillstrokinstillstrokinalmost 14 years ago
Surprising!

Enjoyable twist in situations. Captivating story chapter to chapter. You have a dedicated fan.

gaesmogaesmoalmost 14 years ago
Better

For the most part I don't like Cluck stories...but they are an interesting couple, and I do like the twist where He gets to have Ray's wife. I still think that the marriage would crash and burn because of her "cheating", but maybe I am wrong and you have another twist...just please don't make his a wimp!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
what a clever little writter

you almost won both crowds , cuck-lovers and cuck-haters.

As I generaly don't like cuck stories much I didn't like this either (powerplays in sex are SO 80s)

BUT , I liked how the loving husband got the better deal in the end (fairy tale ending I'm afraid) and the neglecting and arrogant one 'lost' .

Poizon69Poizon69almost 14 years ago
Okay Lynn.

I have to give you credit for this chapter. The end was actually how I would imagine an open marriage, the couple still stay 'in love' and they both get to 'play' so no worries there. Still not sure about this whole Cuckolding thing, but hey if that's your thing, then go for it, I guess. Anyway Lynn, well done for this end chapter, parity has been restored.

peteinchicagopeteinchicagoalmost 14 years ago
Finally!

This is the only chapter I've read, not being a big fan of whimpy bastards who put up with the wife and her bull. That's what guns and divorce courts are for! However the description of Ray's wife chasing him piqued my curiosity. I thought it was great! Cuckolding the bull, how poetic! The slut of a wife made into a cukqueen, that's too good. Now that the shoe's on the other foot I hope you keep Jerry and Joan in charge, let them confront Ray and humiliate him for a turn. Hell, I wouldn't mind seeing some major humiliation coming to Carol after her treatment of her husband. This chapter was so good I may have to go back and read the rest.

snathsnathabout 10 years ago
Turn around

This is what is called turning upside down. You have a dirty mind, writer! A fiver, thanks

DiscoveringUtopiaDiscoveringUtopiaover 5 years ago
All you cuck haters are hypocrites

All it takes is two ladies getting together and your leopard spots change.

Freudzslip69Freudzslip69about 3 years ago

I really loved this one. I said before in my comments that my wife fucked a lot of men with me there, but in control, not like a real cuck. I could have stopped it any time I wanted to. What I failed to mention, was that when we first fell in love and started to "play" with other men fucking her, she said she was fine with doing it. She got a great deal of pleasure fucking others with me in control (we had a mild DOM/sub relationship with me the DOM. I've always been a bit DOM with women, and sub with men.), but asked me to pledge that I wouldn't fuck another woman. Men were fine, but no women. She told me that if I couldn't do that, she loved me and was more than OK with a monogamous relationship with me, She said she enjoyed what we did with other men, but could give up in a heartbeat if I wasn't OK with not fucking other women. Well, at one point, we met a Lesbian couple and she became very attracted to one of them...a first for her. They flirted shamelessly, and I knew she wanted to go to bed with her. Her partner had to go to California for a week. We invited her over to dinner. After dinner, I told my wife to show her our house, and I would clean up from dinner. I took my time, and finally, after about an hour, went to our bedroom. I opened the sliding doors ( I knew exactly what I was going to find) very quietly and saw that they were both in our bed, naked and fucking. I slowly started to quietly close the doors and leave them to it. But, my wife heard me and stopped me and the both asked me in. My wife told me to make love to our friend. I was shocked, asked her several times if she was sure, she convinced me that she was. Aside from the sexual pleasure I had from us three being together in bed, fucking, I was elated that my wife did what she did, and was in the position I was usually in. This of course showed me something about myself. I was a bit jealous but didn't realize it. I loved watching her get fucked by other, and, even if I was in control, I still had a little jealousy deep down. Don't get me wrong. I loved it almost as much as she did whence got fucked. And we fucked like bunnies afterwards, but its a very complicated issue. And it can be a powder keg if not VERY careful, I've seen so many couples break up from this,

This chapter was very enjoyable and fulfilling for me especially.

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