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The End?
I am guessing here, but this seems like a quite logical stopping point. You could go on, but the story would probably get bizarre. I liked the way it flowed and the soft love of the "lesser" lover is just perfect for some women. The twists at the end were delicious.
You have told a first rate, fun story. Thanks and praise to you.
Wow!
I loved this... the car fucking ... then the 'turn around'!! Mmmm
Nice to see a little equality in their marriage.
Pretty well-written, flowed easily, and the humor was nice too. Thanks for writing.
Turn About is Fair Play
I loved how you took the story and turned it around so that the cuckhold turned the tables on the bull. And that you added Carol into the mix...making both of your "heroes" bi. Simply delicious.
Surprising!
Enjoyable twist in situations. Captivating story chapter to chapter. You have a dedicated fan.
Better
For the most part I don't like Cluck stories...but they are an interesting couple, and I do like the twist where He gets to have Ray's wife. I still think that the marriage would crash and burn because of her "cheating", but maybe I am wrong and you have another twist...just please don't make his a wimp!
what a clever little writter
you almost won both crowds , cuck-lovers and cuck-haters.
As I generaly don't like cuck stories much I didn't like this either (powerplays in sex are SO 80s)
BUT , I liked how the loving husband got the better deal in the end (fairy tale ending I'm afraid) and the neglecting and arrogant one 'lost' .
Okay Lynn.
I have to give you credit for this chapter. The end was actually how I would imagine an open marriage, the couple still stay 'in love' and they both get to 'play' so no worries there. Still not sure about this whole Cuckolding thing, but hey if that's your thing, then go for it, I guess. Anyway Lynn, well done for this end chapter, parity has been restored.
Finally!
This is the only chapter I've read, not being a big fan of whimpy bastards who put up with the wife and her bull. That's what guns and divorce courts are for! However the description of Ray's wife chasing him piqued my curiosity. I thought it was great! Cuckolding the bull, how poetic! The slut of a wife made into a cukqueen, that's too good. Now that the shoe's on the other foot I hope you keep Jerry and Joan in charge, let them confront Ray and humiliate him for a turn. Hell, I wouldn't mind seeing some major humiliation coming to Carol after her treatment of her husband. This chapter was so good I may have to go back and read the rest.
Turn around
This is what is called turning upside down. You have a dirty mind, writer! A fiver, thanks
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