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by Algonquin Twit

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imurddyimurddyalmost 14 years ago
Fizzler!

Your story showed promise, but I expected more after all the build-up. Just as the eroticism was starting, it prematurely ejaculated. Your transition from dream to reality was rather abrupt! While the horror of breast cancer is very real, you need more dream to eroticize it up.

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