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Tonight you're mine!

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by Anonymous11/05/11

Nasty but nice!

Took me a couple of times to read it and get the flow, but this is freaking hot! I read the story and now I see where the poem comes from. The top is nasty but loving in the end. I think you rock as a writer.

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