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Promising Danielle Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by PennLady05/11/10

Lovely

Nice job. Not sure more is needed, but I won't object. :)

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by photographer05/11/10

Just as I thought

The young lady in my life went through similar trauma. You wrote well concerning what Danielle went through. My young lady also considered the whole sordid thing to be her fault and it took a lot of work to convince her otherwise.

Stories like this are needed to educate the readers to the fact that this sort of thing occurs - more frequently than is realised, and causes terrible psychological damage.

Keep writing - you're doing a great job.

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by Anonymous05/11/10

More!

Great story...let the love grow. don't cheapen it with sordid random couplings. Those aren't always necessary

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by wjtherman05/11/10

Fantastic!

You're doing a fantastic job! Keep it up!

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by catman7105/11/10

results

know that they have each other, the confronting of her family, or more to the point, what happens after she finds a balance is what i hope for next, things like this do not "heal" without some closure one way another, and as another peson wrote, i have expierence with a situation like this( not as a loved one , but as a friend that found out)

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by Anonymous05/11/10

Extraordinary

Very moving love story. You write well, keeping the reader

engaged. Please continue to share your gift with us

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by AzPilot05/11/10

A very well done story.

Thank you for an intertaining interlude.

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by mariasmd05/12/10

ah

i know this is a work of fiction but, her family are seriously disturbed for what they did to her. so great that she is able to live still.

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