All Comments on 'Nikki's Shoes Ch. 02'

Please write more

You, my friend, are something very special. Please keep writing: I would offer helpful criticism if I could find anything to criticize!

This is more fulfilling than the cum-soaked and orgasm-dependant styles of 99.99% or the writers here (including myself)- this is like.....good enough to pay for kind of stuff!!!!

PLEASE keep writing.

And I am going to have to put some stilettos in my next story- you make them sexy for someone who didnt see/feel/grok the whole scene.

That takes talent!

And I love your technique of making the journey to the sex the whole story- as the previous commenter mentioned; the rest of us have to use ooh's and spews to get even close to the level of sensuality you bring.

I bow before you!