Is this really a Cuckold story? It seems more like group sex, everyone is getting sex from somewhere and so far no one is getting humiliated or disrespected,
by
Anonymous05/15/10
What is a cuck?
A cuck is a guy whose wife is getting fucked by another guy. He may not know it, he may know it and not care, he may know it and be turned on, he may known it and be humiliated, etc. There are all kinds of cucks.
by
Anonymous05/15/10
If You are Worried About the Title, Start at the First Installment
OMG, I thought it was ending this the last installment, but this was a turn I wasn't expecting (by the way, if the other reader is concerned, Ray was the cuck here and beginning in the first installment the story teller husband-does he have a name? Is the cuck, Big Time). You really are a masterful author. Your ability to capture a man's emotions is stunning. When Ray started to taunt him about how Carol loved it, I felt the jealosy and immdiately worried that Carl was gaining control again (will he?). Thank you for this story.
I support you in your choice to keep the series in Loving Wives, even though I am sure the same detractors that complained husband participating, cuck stories belong in Gay will challenge you again (hmmm, you had a girl/girl scene, perhaps they will complain it should be in Lesbian-for Chrissakes, the story is multi-faceted). Please, keep writing this series. The past times I have weighed in on your stories, my comments were in this tone. I have always been anonymous because I am too lazy to open a membership on my phone. For now call me "Wants to be Cucked".
I see there is discussion about who or what is a cuckold. In the instant story, most assumed Jerry was the cuckold and Carol along with her lover Ray were the people cuckolding him. In this chapter it turns that Ray is also cuckold by his wife with Jerry of all men. What a circle.
Just for clarity, this simple definition of the word from Dictionary.com:
1.the husband of an unfaithful wife.
I often when writing and constantly when I proof and edit keep Dictionary.com open because I find that my initial knowledge of a word is less than complete. In this case, I have long understood that so much of the behavior associated with the word cuckold is modern fiction, and poorly written fiction at that. There is no implication that the cuckold husband is a wimp, agrees with, or encourages his wife's behavior. The cuckold is totally passive and non-decisive. His wife, not girlfriend or SO, makes him a cuckold by having sex with another man; once with one man, a thousand times with a hundred men.
As Omar the tent maker said years ago, "The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ, Moves on: nor all your Piety nor Wit Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line, Nor all your Tears wash out a Word of it"
Once a cuckold, a cuckold. The word says nothing about the man, only about his wife.
By the way, I have enjoyed reading this series and especially this chapter. It reaffirms my belief in the complexity of people. Complexity is what makes us all human and whole.
it getting to be another hole to fill. great story again love the action.
this horny story it getting a whole lot more to take in with the now ass fucking how lucky can you be. once again brilliant storyline and most
excellent writing.
I would have had Jerry fucking Joan regularly too. She had really never experienced being made love to. So I would have added much foreplay cunnilingus, and of course had him always lapping up her cream pie. She would fall in love with him. He would own her heart.
Then he could ditch Carol, who slutted him out in the first place, leaving her with nothing but hickies on her neck and a relationship with a hairy hulking monster who was now looking for a job!
Meanwhile, Jerry would now work in a corporation he would soon own half of, while fucking a new wife who suited him much better.
Show me a man like Ray who doesn't lick and kiss his wife's pussy, and I'll show you a sure fire way to take her away from him! Especially if we just filled it with cum. She will adore us for doing it! Been there! Done that!
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Is this really a Cuckold story? It seems more like group sex, everyone is getting sex from somewhere and so far no one is getting humiliated or disrespected,
What is a cuck?
A cuck is a guy whose wife is getting fucked by another guy. He may not know it, he may know it and not care, he may know it and be turned on, he may known it and be humiliated, etc. There are all kinds of cucks.
If You are Worried About the Title, Start at the First Installment
OMG, I thought it was ending this the last installment, but this was a turn I wasn't expecting (by the way, if the other reader is concerned, Ray was the cuck here and beginning in the first installment the story teller husband-does he have a name? Is the cuck, Big Time). You really are a masterful author. Your ability to capture a man's emotions is stunning. When Ray started to taunt him about how Carol loved it, I felt the jealosy and immdiately worried that Carl was gaining control again (will he?). Thank you for this story.
I support you in your choice to keep the series in Loving Wives, even though I am sure the same detractors that complained husband participating, cuck stories belong in Gay will challenge you again (hmmm, you had a girl/girl scene, perhaps they will complain it should be in Lesbian-for Chrissakes, the story is multi-faceted). Please, keep writing this series. The past times I have weighed in on your stories, my comments were in this tone. I have always been anonymous because I am too lazy to open a membership on my phone. For now call me "Wants to be Cucked".
Cuckold - a definition
I see there is discussion about who or what is a cuckold. In the instant story, most assumed Jerry was the cuckold and Carol along with her lover Ray were the people cuckolding him. In this chapter it turns that Ray is also cuckold by his wife with Jerry of all men. What a circle.
Just for clarity, this simple definition of the word from Dictionary.com:
1.the husband of an unfaithful wife.
I often when writing and constantly when I proof and edit keep Dictionary.com open because I find that my initial knowledge of a word is less than complete. In this case, I have long understood that so much of the behavior associated with the word cuckold is modern fiction, and poorly written fiction at that. There is no implication that the cuckold husband is a wimp, agrees with, or encourages his wife's behavior. The cuckold is totally passive and non-decisive. His wife, not girlfriend or SO, makes him a cuckold by having sex with another man; once with one man, a thousand times with a hundred men.
As Omar the tent maker said years ago, "The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ, Moves on: nor all your Piety nor Wit Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line, Nor all your Tears wash out a Word of it"
Once a cuckold, a cuckold. The word says nothing about the man, only about his wife.
By the way, I have enjoyed reading this series and especially this chapter. It reaffirms my belief in the complexity of people. Complexity is what makes us all human and whole.
taking an ass fucking as she cums her load
it getting to be another hole to fill. great story again love the action.
this horny story it getting a whole lot more to take in with the now ass fucking how lucky can you be. once again brilliant storyline and most
excellent writing.
Slightly different take
I would have had Jerry fucking Joan regularly too. She had really never experienced being made love to. So I would have added much foreplay cunnilingus, and of course had him always lapping up her cream pie. She would fall in love with him. He would own her heart.
Then he could ditch Carol, who slutted him out in the first place, leaving her with nothing but hickies on her neck and a relationship with a hairy hulking monster who was now looking for a job!
Meanwhile, Jerry would now work in a corporation he would soon own half of, while fucking a new wife who suited him much better.
Show me a man like Ray who doesn't lick and kiss his wife's pussy, and I'll show you a sure fire way to take her away from him! Especially if we just filled it with cum. She will adore us for doing it! Been there! Done that!
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