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Rhonda's Two Little Secrets

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/15/10

Heh!

nice story. he is a good guy,

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by Hatsuda05/15/10

I always enjoy a story with redeeming qualities

And, it was well written. It seems to be the two defining qualities of your stories that I enjoy. Keep up the good work. H-

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by Anonymous05/15/10

good story with happy ending

Nice job Slirpuff. This story is quite good and the second secret was disclosed finally towards the end of the story. Keep writing. You have great ability to write interesting and meaningful stories. RAG

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by Average_Writer05/15/10

Nice story Slirpuff. Good to see your still writing well written stories that are a good fun read as well. Thanks again. And keep the stories coming.

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by Anonymous05/16/10

Come on, this was bull shit

This started out well, with the guy not being a wimp, not allowing girls to disrespect him, etc., but it didn't deliver in the end. Nothing happened. I've enjoyed some of your stories, but I'm really getting tired of the BS stories about the army, or some situation in which nothing interesting ever happens.

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by Anonymous05/16/10

Your writing improves and it's an easy reading style

and I like (generally) what you have to say. I'd probably enjoy this one. I'm afraid I had to stop reading, in sheer exasperation, though, when you laid it on that they'd been seeing each other for three months before she told him about the child. So they'd talked about what, exactly? something just grated on me there. I'll come back when I've adjusted to this disfeasability. Thanks...Mancelt.

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by Pistolpackinpete05/16/10

Let's find out more about....

....the rents,the only interesting characters here.Maybe this could have been developed more before posting/

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by Anonymous05/16/10

Stupid people

Two stupid people in love. She keeps her 5 year old a secret for 3 months because she (KNOWS) he will leave as soon as he finds out she has a 5 year old. He falls in love with her and 5 year old and proposes. She tells him not to invite her parents to their wedding because they are religous zealots who hate her and have lost respect for her, but he knows better and calls the parents and invites them to the wedding. They turn him down and call her a slut that they never want to see again. It gets more complicated about her being a stripper but the fact is he and she both think they know everything and their arrogance almost kills their wedding.
60 year old George

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by Anonymous05/16/10

A very enjoyable story

A very enjoyable story. You always come up with interesting plots.

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by FireFox5905/16/10

Good Little Story

Several people questioned how he treated the two dates in the beginning of the story and how he handled Rhonda's past. To me there's a huge difference. The two dates totally disrepected him in front of everyone. What Rhonda did in her past before him makes little difference if all she did was be a stripper.

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by sexmate05/17/10

I enjoyed it!

A nice feel good story! Prostituting and exotic dancing are pretty far apart.
And in this case her dancing is in the past. She did what she had to do. I can't falt her for that. But her parents are the whacked ones.

Thanks for writing!

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by oldwayne05/19/10

Hell, I thought it was great!

I don't know why some folks can't just read a nice piece of fiction without having to over-analyze it. Personally, I thought it was a fine little tale. Thanks for having written it.

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by Anonymous05/21/10

I Liked It A Lot.

I agree, she has some trust issues, but with those parents why not. Good story, thanks.

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by digdaddyrich05/22/10

Well written and a good believeable storyline

A very well writen story that has a lot of believable characters.

The story seems real to life and is good and straight to the point.

Enough background to make it real but not too wordy

Thanks for the good read.

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by bruce2205/22/10

Very enjoyable story!

The only unbelievable part of the tale was the protagonist being so full of good sense! They don't seem to make to many of those.

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by bigguy32303/16/11

Nice story. It feels unfinished as if there should be another chapter.

Maybe it's just me.

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by robinhod05/01/11

I liked it and

I'd go further than other commentators. If she HAD prostituted herself when her parents disowned her at such a young age, in such a vulnerable state, and with no real options for supporting herself and her baby, would this have been totally unforgivable? Especially after a significant lapse of time during which she appears to have been living as an honest employee? Let's have some Christian charity.

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by DWornock07/01/11

What a jealous creap!

It was bad enough when he walked out on the first girl and left her. However, to repeat that again just because his girlfriend danced with her exboyfriend was too much. Therefore, at that point I stopped reading this stupid story and gave it 1*.

I don't waste my time reading about some jealous ass.

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by FD4512/26/11

I have a problem with this story

And I mean this with all respect. I shall ignore the glaring grammatical errors because you've improved no that front so well.

The problem is this: you started the story with wet tongue/crotch syndrome. Then you brought in Rhonda. The issue with Rhonda was NOT wet tongue/crotch syndrome. It was a shifting of the basis of the plot without explanation. The lead in had nothing to do with the rest of the story so I expected different problems with Rhonda.

It would have been better served to discuss lies and secrets with previous girlfriends.

It is a quibble, but a jarring one, at least in my mind. Still, thanks for the story.

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by cliffhanger2012/08/12

A CHECKERED PAST

Well, you know I don't much give a damn about grammatical errors. As long as the story is good, who in the hell cares. And what we were yesterday doesn't have a fucking thing to do with who we are today. I gave it a 5.

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by tazz31712/08/12

RELATIONSHIPS AND MARRIAGES

should begin with a clean slate as possible. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by betrayedbylove12/15/12

Well Written

She wasn't a whore, slut, prostitute or any other names you come up with. She was a dancer. She was a retired dancer. So what's the problem? No problem. Have a nice life.

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by ythebadger12/15/12

I agree with FD45's comment

It was like the original intention of the story was derailed somewhere along the line. Even so, it was good.

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by sugna11/30/13

Really?

She has already been found to be a liar by omission. How many "strippers" do nothing but stand on a stage and strip? Ever been to a strip club? They typically do have contact with the customers. The more money you spend the more they offer, a little more and you have a lap dance, a bit more and you have a blow job, ect. That is the kind of "dance" strippers do. Judge it or not, that's the way it is. If he wants to marry a whore with a kid, that is his decision.

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by Kyuzio12/05/13

Sugna, what strip joints are you going to?

Most strippers are just that - strippers, exotic dancers, whatever. I have met many women who have done it and none of them have ever prostituted themselves . Most of them did it for the same reason as Rhonda did - to make money to make ends meet while supporting a child, going to school, or trying to get out from under debt. Some of them liked doing it and also took jobs as nude models. But none that I know of ever gave a blowjob, hand job, or a fuck for money. No, they weren't all little angels, but they weren't whores.

I'm not saying that there aren't women who have done that, but to paint all exotic dancers with the same brush is bigoted and little-minded.

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by Drbeamer333312/18/13

Enjoyed it

I found it odd in the end that he didn't profess his love for her. He kept asking if she prostituted herself, as if that was the condition for him marrying her. So, if she had prostituted herself would he have not married her? Not sure why that would make a difference if he loved her. She is a different person and that would have been in the past.

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by Anonymous12/24/13

He didn't love her, he just wanted a convenient fuck.

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by Anonymous12/29/13

exceptions

I have met many strippers over the years. Just like any profession, some were sweet and just earning a living. Some were complete sluts and were only out for themselves. I would not have a problem with the kind of girl described in this story.

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by Anonymous01/05/14

Holier than thou

For all you "HOLIER THAN THOU TYPES", I quote from the scriptures, "JUDGE NOT LEST THEE BE JUDGED"!

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by Anonymous01/05/14

re: anonymous-holier than thou

Calm down fellow, take your meds. This is a erotic site, leave the scriptures at home.
It's a story, a fantasy. Don't understand, why all the irritations. Enjoy the story, if not, move on to another one. As always, good job, Slirpuff.

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by KarenE03/23/14

Drbeamer3333

While it's possible, it is not stated explicitly that he would dump her if she had been a prostitute, but there IS a difference between stripping and prostitution and he has a right to know so that he can make an informed decision.

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by Ambivalence04/04/14

Hmmm, brutal self assessment...

If a woman with one or more kids is forced to choose between something she finds personally demeaning and caring for her kids, I'd hope she picked the kids...
Likewise, the same for a man...
I've known men who considered working in fast food beneath them even if it would have put food on the table for their kids...

I've also known a woman who danced for a living and in later years actually hooked some (she had three kids)...

I'm not sure I'd ever want to find out my wife had hooked... but more because I'd worry that if our finances tanked she might do it again to keep us afloat rather than because she had PREVIOUSLY done it... on the other hand, if I found out she hooked just because she liked it... that would be a deal breaker... you should be willing to swim in filth if that's what it takes to survive, not for the fun of it.

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by Tootight107/01/14

ya got me

good story, nice sequence of events, believable, nice

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by kdcee7908/07/14

Another good story

Hell, that's two in a row that I've enjoyed Steve; not too bad at all. Very believable & unfortunately through personal experience of friends not that uncommon theses days. This tale could have been a biography of my friends' grand daughter, however, unfortunately for her & her 2 sons, her husband was killed in a serious auto accident involving 6 other vehicles 5 years after their marriage. Total of 7 dead & 11 seriously injured. To my knowledge she never remarried. 4 ****

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by Anonymous12/24/14

interesting story

But did he really believe her? First she hides the fact that she has a child for what? Months while they were first dating? Then she hides ( a lie of omission is the same as lying) the facts about her being an erotic dancer. What else is she hiding? Or lying about? Or failing to tell him? There are just too many question marks to marry this woman and take on the responsibility of raising her kid. I don't think he realizes what's involved with taking on the pair of them. Seems like a daunting task better left to someone more mature than he.

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by Anonymous01/27/15

****

I liked it. Nice to read everything worked out for Rhonda and Steve. Some women strip to support their drug addiction. Others to pay school tuition. Some to just live. Fuck the fundamentalists and do-gooders. Live and let live. Cheers! c29

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by Anonymous12/11/15

A stripper and an unwed Mother?

And he believed a word she said? Even a dumb man would have run for the hills and thanked his lucky stars that he didn't make the mistake of marrying her. He'd never be first in her life. She'd never fully relax and she'd always have her running shoes under the bed. Bad idea.

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by sbrooks10301/17/16

I Liked It!

She was understandably nervous about her past, it's caused her problems in the past, so she was afraid to trust him with whole story.

Once she did, he had enough love for her to believe her and go ahead with making a life with her and Sara.

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by Anonymous12/12/16

LEAVE THE PAST IN THE PAST

Fuuuuuck mee man! My missus is a retired sex worker! She kept it a secret from me until last month, how I found out I was looking at sexy girls on the Internet . The hold and be blowed a picture of my wife getting fucked! It was taken when she was 19 ! I knew it was her by the birth mark ! She cried and cried I held her . Then she asked me how I felt about it? Well I had a roaring fat man! Instant turn on Man! Long story short I still love her! And I have watched all her movies with her, we have Three kids and are mine! Story is Fantastic! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE! OH also her Sister lives with us her Husband couldn't handle it both Girls Whores. His words BYE

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by Anonymous12/17/16

That's It?!!

I feel like the story was only half finished. The ending was disappointing.

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