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love it ...
I have just read the whole story from chapter 1. I love it can't wait to see what will happen next ..
Very good
I love this story, I cannot wait for the rest of it.
Brilliant
Wow I love this! I so hope you continue your work. This story is beautifull!
WONDERFUL
A really enjoyable story throughout the ten chapters. i know why there has been a big break and i wish you well in your married life but please do remind your Master you have a number of followers who are desperatly seeking more of this wonderful story.
Son-of-a-gun - I've
read the existing ten chapters in one go. The story is that exciting. My only drag is that there are occasional grammatical and spelling mistakes. I know that minor mistakes are hard to find in an erotic tale 'cause the reader is plowing ahead but proofreading with a critical eye ain't all that difficult.
Good story; please continue.
Please!
Please continue this! I love where you have taken everything. Even though there are some blank spots, you make it clear enough what has occurred. I look forward to more. I hope he will confess love!
More please.
Love this story. Would love to read more!!!
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