I really love your descriptions of the characters and their acts but I really hate the way Tommy talks. Keep up the great writing and I hope you keep on with this series.
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Anonymous04/12/04
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good story i liked it but how old is tommy...... stupid really he talks like hes 10........
Good but hate the dialog
I really love your descriptions of the characters and their acts but I really hate the way Tommy talks. Keep up the great writing and I hope you keep on with this series.
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good story i liked it but how old is tommy...... stupid really he talks like hes 10........
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