All Comments on 'The Workout'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Enjoyed, but ...

Jerry in Washington State, USA - I delayed reading this and commenting on the story because it already had two strikes against it before I even read it. I check your story list daily, hoping for the next chapter of Lust In La Jolla. When I first saw this title, I assumed it was the next chapter. Of course, it isn't. It took me a few days to go ahead and read the story on its own merits. I liked it but it didn't push any of my buttons. It takes a very unusual short story to get my attention, because I prefer to get to know the characters in the story and get involved in their story, like your longer series Lust In La Jolla. Your story was well written, just not one I'm remember very long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

To the author is the most interesting one I have read in awhile & have read it a few times now. LOVED IT

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