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Good read very intresting almost spellbinding
Shellden
grandchild
When you want a job right, do it yourself. Little secrets and a happy family. Well written story and very creative and interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Very well written
You have a very fertile imagination (pun intended), and the storyline promises lots of twists and turns still to come. Nicely done!
when is the next story coming
Very well done.
An excellent story. I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work.
Excellent story. I loved every bit of it, and I'm hoping like hell that you'll add more to it soon -- with more of Ethan fucking Laura, to boot.
Best
I'm glad you're writing again, and just like the others this story is one of the best
hot story...
kinky,dirty and detailed...yess!! what next?
Loved it!
Absolutely loved this story. I am a big fan of the impregnation and Non consent fantasy stuff. One of the best stories I have read on here in a long time.
Maybe Ethan could sneek that big cock up her little pooper as well?
Can't wait for chapter 2.
loved story
where is part 2. its 3 months looking for sequell. cannot wait..
el chantaje del bebe
porque no hay actualizacion, esta historia no puede terminar aqui, tenemos que saber que pasa entre el triangulo amoroso, por favor escribir otros capitulos muy pronto, ana maria
Pls finish up the story
Yeah dude we been waiting for like ages...wheres the rest? Dont leave us hangin!
chantaje bebe
por favor, actualizar como prometiste, estamos esperando ansioso estos nuevos capitulos muy pronto y con toda la ansiedad, am_sr
wow!
I love this story, I can't wait to read more! It was so hot!
Continue
Can't wait for more. Please write more of this story too soon.
Wow
AMAZING!!!!! what a yummy story!!:)
can't wait...
....for part 2!
More
You've GOT to finish this.
need the next chapter
this story is amazingly hot!please please please continue it!
too good
SUPERHOT!!!!!!!!!CAN B MADE IN@ A MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK......PLS CONTINUE
Intact
Great read shame it appears that next chaptet will not be forthcoming
but its already complete & intact. Excellent work
Oh WOW
Please don't wait to long for the next chapter on this Awesome story
I can hardly wait.
The minority
I understand I'm going to be the odd one out here but I was disgusted about half way through the first page. I'm pretty open minded, fantasy-wise, but I just couldn't tolerate the idea of such betrayal on all ends. Good writing though, just not my cup of tea subject wise. Oh well, to each his own.
Next please
When do we get the next part of the story?
nice very nice
you should start thinking this as an epic this story reads as truth to be told of some blue blood out there
you get
a 1 for not finishing the story.
Finish the story please
Finish this story there more chapters to tell.
wow
great story please write more vey erotic
great story
but would find it interesting if you added another chapter. Nice read, thanks for writing and sharing.
Sequel....?
This was a good start, but where is the rest. Or at least a sequel
more please!
please continue.
Still alive I hope. This shouldn't end here; it's too hot and arousing. This, along with Seth's Fetish, is one of my favorites. I really hope you are still here.
I want a sequel with the birth of the baby and more fucking between Ethan and Laura. Have Laura give multiple births around the first and/or the second time. Even when Rob wants to take a break from all the babies, Laura keeps getting pregnant.
more please
there is so much more to this story and I hope one day you will write the follow up/s to it. seems to me that ethan just may have some feelings for his daughter-in-law and vice versa that could be explored.
Such Intelligent Idiots
Everyone reading this story can think of many ways out of her predicament. In this story the supposedly intelligent character cannot.
no blackmail
a drug rape story is more like it and I hate a rape story sick people get off on
rape trash story
Yet another...
...leftover not continued.
Garbage
I made it half way down the first page before my trash-o-meter went off. I thought 12 year olds weren't allowed on herr...
Enjoyed it
I enjoyed it. The best part was when Ethan took her on his lap and told her that he would do it on her marital bed. She had no other option but to remain on Ethan's strong lap and go to her bed. I also liked it when she told Ethan - "I want my tits to fill up with milk for you, I want you to drink from my breasts."
Fantasy
Once again, we see people posting unkind things ANONYMOUSLY .... Gutless twats.
Unless stated othetwise, these stories are fiction/fantasies and, whilst most of us find rape abhorrent, many find the FANTASY of forced sex thrilling and I believe that many couples use Play-Rape to enhance their sex lives.
If its not YOUR thing, fine, no problem but don't run a story or a writer down because YOU have a problem with subject ... Help the writer or SHUT THE FUCK UP.
To Be Continued
The only problem I have with the story is that it's not followed by another chapter. Other than that, so hot. I am sure that Ethan will continue to impregnate her and I want to read about it. :-)
more that is not fair to only write one part
Where is the second part??? Do not leave us hanging on for more.
LOL
GE Tiger Suck my cock there
LOL
If and when husband finds out killem both
waiting...
can't wait for the next chapter! Although pedos really aren't my thing, this story's really steamy.
Hopefully, she'll learn that she's having twins. However, the twins are the result of one of those very rare occasions where her husband is the father of one; Ethan is the father of the other..
great!!
I see you have posted as recently as DEC 2014-will you be adding a chap 2 any time soon? I love this story!!
am a redneck
I flat-ass do not like this topic nor how it was carried out
More?!
When is the rest of the story going to be finished? I need more!
lol
a 75 year old would have a heart attack if he could get it up and have sex with
a hot young women.
Cervix shame
That's just not how a cervix works. For shame! Completely ruined the story.
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