Not bad first story, but short on length
Pretty well written and you end the first chapter with a tease. Looking forward to Chapter 2.
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Way Too Short
Not bad first story, but short on length
Pretty Good
Pretty well written and you end the first chapter with a tease. Looking forward to Chapter 2.
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