Sorry Bob. A real BOW WOW. Pulling a choo choo while only a couple of blocks away from hone, "ON OR NEAR A COLEGE CAMPUS" with a couple dozen guys and your brother in law, every one in town knew about it before she had her morning coffee and her husband will find out as soon as he gets home thus elevating the need to worry how to carry on when he gets back and is there.
Only an asshole loser would drug a girl for sex. Lit stories (for the most part) are all about fantasy. Why anyone would have this as a fantasy that tuned him on is beyond me. Guys who do this sort of thing end up in jail. Maybe going to jail is the real fantasy here.
I love the way you know just which chicks to force....
.....every fuckin' time they outgun you!!!-Beginning to see a pattern here.Or many. Maybe that was just flashbacks. When are you going to post Robs' wedding here chickenshit!
The writing itself is good but I, like the others would have enjoyed it more had he kept her to himself, or maybe just one other friend. I also just about hurled when she made him eat her out. Gross beyond measure.
Even though well written giving a woman something (as opposed to her willingly consuming it herself) is slimy in addition to illegal. Ugh! I know it's just a story but that doesn't mean I can forgive it.
English
ok story...
...but not a fan of rape. thanks for taking the time t submit a story
Decent, but unrealistic
Just a bit too unrealistic for me. It became disappointing when it turned into a full-fledged gang-bang.
Not very good at all:
Sorry Bob. A real BOW WOW. Pulling a choo choo while only a couple of blocks away from hone, "ON OR NEAR A COLEGE CAMPUS" with a couple dozen guys and your brother in law, every one in town knew about it before she had her morning coffee and her husband will find out as soon as he gets home thus elevating the need to worry how to carry on when he gets back and is there.
Sucks
Only an asshole loser would drug a girl for sex. Lit stories (for the most part) are all about fantasy. Why anyone would have this as a fantasy that tuned him on is beyond me. Guys who do this sort of thing end up in jail. Maybe going to jail is the real fantasy here.
It would have been better if he kept her to himself
He should have been able to be the only one to fuck her and turn her into his slut and no one else would get any of her.
But that's just my way of thinking.
Thanks for the story.
Disappointing
I liked it until others joined in. Don't care for that gangbang stuff. Good writing though.
Very disappointing
He goes from not touching her because of his brother and then turns her into anyone's slut. Shit.....
I love the way you know just which chicks to force....
.....every fuckin' time they outgun you!!!-Beginning to see a pattern here.Or many. Maybe that was just flashbacks. When are you going to post Robs' wedding here chickenshit!
Could have been better.
The writing itself is good but I, like the others would have enjoyed it more had he kept her to himself, or maybe just one other friend. I also just about hurled when she made him eat her out. Gross beyond measure.
Disgusting....
DID I SAY DISGUSTING?
Rape is rape
Even though well written giving a woman something (as opposed to her willingly consuming it herself) is slimy in addition to illegal. Ugh! I know it's just a story but that doesn't mean I can forgive it.
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