All Comments on 'Aphrodisia Ch. 06'

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lickoyeeshisindaylickoyeeshisindayalmost 14 years ago
Great...

nice to see a new chapter. Not sure I like the turn of events, but with good there is aways evil.

PslyderFTAPslyderFTAalmost 14 years ago
Wonderful! I'd almost given up hope!

I've been quite a fan of your writing for over a year now, and have been eagerly awaiting the latest chapter. Sorry to hear about the IRL issues, but glad to see you're back at it!

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 14 years ago
Very Good

Cant wait too see how things go . After Jamie meets the Succubus and will he be able to keep himself under control or will Athena help?

spazdspspazdspalmost 14 years ago
Great story

Don't worry about the quantity of sex, the quality is outstanding. The story is quite enjoyable and I have found myself reading it to follow the characters. Great plot development and I cant wait to see where it goes.

Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Thanks

I have been waiting for this for a long time, thank you for delivering.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
not bad

liked it, love your style. i'm glad you recognized the lack of "screwing" and intend to "make up for it." you're a wise writer. i admit that before i finished the story and your comments i was planning to mention that and say that "after all, this is a dirty story site." but clearly, i don't have to :)

keep up the good work.

i'm going to try to copy this story to my computer so that i might enjoy it more often, if that's ok of course

MrOzymandMrOzymandalmost 14 years ago
Welcome back!

I had favorite'd you a long time ago, and had feared you had moved on. Glad to see you continuing this storyline, and seeing the world expand before the readers. Gods, goddesses, demons. The world is quite an interesting place Jamie lives in.

Keep up the great work. =)

j1969j1969over 13 years ago
Keep it Up!

Enjoying your work quite a bit! Get a new editor for the typos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This was... kinda dark.

Not that I mind of course, were there is good, there is evil.

And Duncan got what he deserved in the end, though I do worry about ol' Jamie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very Good!

Enjoyable sex, but the plot is so interesting it's like frosting on a great cake :)

I can't wait to see what happens next, though an Elisha/Gwen interlude would be quite nice as well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
aphrodite

When will Jamie be lucky enough to lay the goddess of love?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more please

Please come back and add to Aphrodisia. It is an awesome story and needs to continue and evolve. You have a talent and I would really like to see more writing from you. Thanks for all of your efforts so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Another Vote for "Please Write More"

You have a public, that wants more.

Tonyusmc3051Tonyusmc3051almost 4 years ago
Bad character

I was really into the story UNTIL Elisha showed up, first the hiding in the car put me off. What is she 8 years old? Then she wanted to be partners and then he slept with his flatmates girl? Yeah, it went downhill for me after that. Sorry, I didn't finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Can we? Agree to disagree?

I truly appreciate Elisha! She's free to give her heart and body as she likes, though it was obviously the Goddess' power/influence that put her in the back of the car. I'm imagining that she had a real need that her assignation with Jamie will help her meet, in addition to all the money that she and the whole crew will have use of once the gold is collected and exchanged.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Writer's Block? or writer's cock ? -innocent-grin-

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

"If you hurt her I'll set you on fire whilst you sleep." The boy said solemnly

AMAZEBALL line!

Great series so far...

10/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

10/10

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yyes, I love the story...and I love the turns it has in the plot/storyline...

Cassie....Hhhmmm...she is a problem, one Jamie can take care of! Evil, personified, makes the plot thicken...

You have 'just enough' eroticism in this chapter to keep it going...those involved are all fortunate to have found each other, forged the bonds, continuing to turn out their LOVE for each other!!

Five**5**Stars!!

MADDOGINTEXAS

NovaMNovaM7 months ago

Tenser and tenser πŸ§Ÿβ€β™€οΈβ™₯οΈπŸŽ‰ Yep, this is where things start flying through the air, with the greatest of ease.

Long and sharp teeth, ridiculously strong muscles and adept warrior princesses.

The story is reaching escape velocity, @Lien_Geller, we fly with you πŸš€πŸŒΈπŸ¦„βœˆοΈ

Thank you 🀎

tinfoilhattinfoilhat6 months ago

Man this is a good story. Too bad it's almost over. Someone should finish this.

armytom1958armytom19583 months ago

I've read this story a few times. Really enjoy the story line progression and each character as they are added. Kept checking back to see if you've add additional chapters. No luck. I saw in your Bio that you updated in 2022 that you intend to add to your stories here. But here it is 2024, and you have nothing new posted. I really hope you at least finish this story. Too many here start great stories and never finish them. I hope you are not one of them. Thanks for sharing here. Tom

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