by Lien_Geller
nice to see a new chapter. Not sure I like the turn of events, but with good there is aways evil.
I've been quite a fan of your writing for over a year now, and have been eagerly awaiting the latest chapter. Sorry to hear about the IRL issues, but glad to see you're back at it!
Cant wait too see how things go . After Jamie meets the Succubus and will he be able to keep himself under control or will Athena help?
Don't worry about the quantity of sex, the quality is outstanding. The story is quite enjoyable and I have found myself reading it to follow the characters. Great plot development and I cant wait to see where it goes.
Keep writing.
I have been waiting for this for a long time, thank you for delivering.
liked it, love your style. i'm glad you recognized the lack of "screwing" and intend to "make up for it." you're a wise writer. i admit that before i finished the story and your comments i was planning to mention that and say that "after all, this is a dirty story site." but clearly, i don't have to :)
keep up the good work.
i'm going to try to copy this story to my computer so that i might enjoy it more often, if that's ok of course
I had favorite'd you a long time ago, and had feared you had moved on. Glad to see you continuing this storyline, and seeing the world expand before the readers. Gods, goddesses, demons. The world is quite an interesting place Jamie lives in.
Keep up the great work. =)
This was... kinda dark.
Not that I mind of course, were there is good, there is evil.
And Duncan got what he deserved in the end, though I do worry about ol' Jamie
Enjoyable sex, but the plot is so interesting it's like frosting on a great cake :)
I can't wait to see what happens next, though an Elisha/Gwen interlude would be quite nice as well!
Please come back and add to Aphrodisia. It is an awesome story and needs to continue and evolve. You have a talent and I would really like to see more writing from you. Thanks for all of your efforts so far.
I was really into the story UNTIL Elisha showed up, first the hiding in the car put me off. What is she 8 years old? Then she wanted to be partners and then he slept with his flatmates girl? Yeah, it went downhill for me after that. Sorry, I didn't finish the story.
I truly appreciate Elisha! She's free to give her heart and body as she likes, though it was obviously the Goddess' power/influence that put her in the back of the car. I'm imagining that she had a real need that her assignation with Jamie will help her meet, in addition to all the money that she and the whole crew will have use of once the gold is collected and exchanged.
"If you hurt her I'll set you on fire whilst you sleep." The boy said solemnly
AMAZEBALL line!
Great series so far...
10/10!!!!!
Yyes, I love the story...and I love the turns it has in the plot/storyline...
Cassie....Hhhmmm...she is a problem, one Jamie can take care of! Evil, personified, makes the plot thicken...
You have 'just enough' eroticism in this chapter to keep it going...those involved are all fortunate to have found each other, forged the bonds, continuing to turn out their LOVE for each other!!
Five**5**Stars!!
MADDOGINTEXAS
Tenser and tenser π§ββοΈβ₯οΈπ Yep, this is where things start flying through the air, with the greatest of ease.
Long and sharp teeth, ridiculously strong muscles and adept warrior princesses.
The story is reaching escape velocity, @Lien_Geller, we fly with you ππΈπ¦βοΈ
Thank you π€
Man this is a good story. Too bad it's almost over. Someone should finish this.
I've read this story a few times. Really enjoy the story line progression and each character as they are added. Kept checking back to see if you've add additional chapters. No luck. I saw in your Bio that you updated in 2022 that you intend to add to your stories here. But here it is 2024, and you have nothing new posted. I really hope you at least finish this story. Too many here start great stories and never finish them. I hope you are not one of them. Thanks for sharing here. Tom