All Comments on 'Flesh and Blood Reality'

Call me a lot of things, ungrateful, silly, whatever. I love how you approach mother-son incest with a good build-up, respect for the characters, and so forth. hey, the pregnancy angle's also a winner in my book. Lately, it's been a lot of tossed-together retreads. Better than the usual spank fodder, but you've written way better than this and I'd love to see you do so.

so soft and real, loving and sensual , i got into it

My admiration for your writing is held 'in abeyance'. The 'abeyance' is one of the things that did it for me. It sounded more like some kind of court report with a lot of distance than a sensuous description of a mother-son relationship.

...but your first dozen or so paragraphs kept saying the same things over and over, just in slightly different words. The pattern was repeated around the middle of the story, but not quite as badly. Working with one of Lit's volunteer editors would probably beat that out of your writing.

Good story having both hot sex and sweet love. Thanks

I thought it was a really good little Mother/Son love story/ Thanks for having written it.

it would have been better if David had fucked the baby up his mother's cunt.

Love sucking a womans milky breast...the taste is so exquisite like nothing you have ever tasted before - like they say - vice is nice - but incest is best....go for it......

should have been pregnant by her son not her dick head ex...

As usual Moondrift does not disappoint in the slightest. 5 star story.

And to those complaining about the baby, did you read the last few paragraphs? I think it was really sweet for David to shower his love and affection on his mom while she was carrying his sister, before fucking another baby in his mom's womb... he's going to be a great father!

Greg sounds like a person that should be catapulted into a brick wall. As for Janet and David. They were lucky to have found their Love and had a good long time together. Great story Loving and sexy as hell.. Thank you.