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Good story, but you've done better.
Call me a lot of things, ungrateful, silly, whatever. I love how you approach mother-son incest with a good build-up, respect for the characters, and so forth. hey, the pregnancy angle's also a winner in my book. Lately, it's been a lot of tossed-together retreads. Better than the usual spank fodder, but you've written way better than this and I'd love to see you do so.
loved it
so soft and real, loving and sensual , i got into it
Not up to your standard
My admiration for your writing is held 'in abeyance'. The 'abeyance' is one of the things that did it for me. It sounded more like some kind of court report with a lot of distance than a sensuous description of a mother-son relationship.
Kind Of OK, But...
...but your first dozen or so paragraphs kept saying the same things over and over, just in slightly different words. The pattern was repeated around the middle of the story, but not quite as badly. Working with one of Lit's volunteer editors would probably beat that out of your writing.
more of a love story than just erotic
Good story having both hot sex and sweet love. Thanks
Rich has nailed it again.
I thought it was a really good little Mother/Son love story/ Thanks for having written it.
a good story, of course, it's by Moondrift, but...
it would have been better if David had fucked the baby up his mother's cunt.
a nice little story
Love sucking a womans milky breast...the taste is so exquisite like nothing you have ever tasted before - like they say - vice is nice - but incest is best....go for it......
crap story
should have been pregnant by her son not her dick head ex...
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