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by avrgblkgrl05/22/10

Very Sexy

I wish I was more articulate. But, I can only describe poems by the way they make me feel. This poem is sexy! The strong influence of the alpha male comes in right from the start. At first, I thought it was the actual energy of the music that created the tone, but the music is echoing him. And he wants "everything"--a pull stronger than matrimony. Watching her succumb (no matter how well she tried to prepare)... very erotic. The last two lines are priceless.

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by SweetOblivion05/23/10

Very evocative

I rather enjoyed your surrender. Sweet O.

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by 08/12/10

Tenderly beautiful

Such an atmosphere you have devised here, in so few words, and layered over it, the poet's tenderness invoking the reality of the interlude. Beautiful.

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by Hyades03/05/11

Picture.

You painted a clear and vivid picture here for me.

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