All Comments on 'A Day at the Beach'

by Derglefergle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Bizarre but kinda charming...

Calling this 'unusual' would be an understatement, but it was certainly worth reading. Perhaps the guy might come back to the beach with his GF and they might find an octopus and a crab for an oceanic gang-bang...?

AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
Thanks for the chuckle--

I like your sense of humor and thought your story was well done as well as a unique point of view.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 14 years ago
Short and sweet

A nice short story. Getting a BJ from a starfish.

Very original.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
good job

a starfish sucking a man's cock doesn't get much weirder than that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it!

Great originality...turned me on 4 sure :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bravo

Wow, beautiful! I really liked the part about the starfish sucking the penis of the man.

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