All Comments on 'Daddy Urges Ch. 01'

He did capture how so very sweet it is to fuck your stepdaughter..........oh the sweet memories!

...his wife and son are sitting up, traumatised by the sounds they heard through the very thin walls.

more between daddy and the daughter, does he take her in the ass, does this evolve to something else (was she on the pill?)....does anyone find out?

Some people leave comments anonymously because they don't have a Lit account. Other, like me, leave anonymous comments because numerous times that i fairly criticized the story, the author deemed it necessary to send me a personal message and was nasty about it. My criticism wasn't harsh in any of those cases.

Ultimately, if you can't handle good or even bad criticism, then don't post stories or disable comments.

The grammar did not detract my attention from the story. I thought it was sexy as sin to have him copping a feel on his sleeping daughter. If she had put up at least a token resistance, it would have been better. As it stands, though, it's still delightfully dirty.

You can sure write a hot scene. I'm going right to chapter 2 to see happens next.

I enjoyed the story - despite the grammar and errors.

Just thank goodness I DON'T have a daughter though!!

Totally against the reality of incest personally - but thoroughly enjoy reading about the subject...and "No" I never masturbate after enjoying the stories, but understand that many would!

Again, enjoyed the read....could be brilliant with professional editing - well done but also think you should perhaps take any critism as constructive and not get upset by it.

I'm sure you'll then grow beyond it...and it will disappear accordingly.

The premise was okay. Not completely original. But boy do you need an editor!