All Comments on 'My Boss And Me: Quickie In A Corner'

I guess things will be picking up in the office. Could be another marriage in the not too distant future. Good story but would of enjoyed it more if it was longer and had another chapter or two.

Thanks

I did enjoy the clarity, the pace and the subject of your submission. You do write well. The dialogue is handled nicely. However (sorry for that) the story could stand some additional information. Although you chose to make the story an interracial submission, the actual interracial matter is limited to a mention of the boss's race, otherwise why does that designation matter? The actual description of the sex involved was, to my mind, a little bit too skimpy (why,after all, do we read Literotica?). At any rate, I think you write well, clearly and interestingly. Please continue to submit your stories. I look forward to seeing where you will go from here.

ILienBagby (Bushy@ureach.com)

But it takes all kinds, no thanks.

i liked it short and sweet , very believable , giving a quick blow job is always fun and tasty getting some black seed, yummme

turned me on for sure

i would go to a wedding every day if i thought i could give a discreet cocksucking to a nice big black cock and swallow all his cum

good short story to the point( of his bbc ) lol

looking for more

A very good read, but it moved fast, and you need more description

liked it , well done, and erotic, maybe some more about the cocksucking would have helped, but still a very real sounding story,

and what girl with a little bit of submissiveness would not love to be on her knees receiving a nice black cock, sounded like she deep throated him also hmmmm the only way to take it

hot, well written. You fucking bad little white hussy slut, you need to be fucked hard by a rangy sun bleached blue eyed 43 year old unforgiving stranger. Thanks...Mancelt.

nice i liked it , short and hot getting some black cock is always good esp in riske' situations

i bet she gets it more often now and longer sessions also

where r u mancelt???? come on big boy

Your a sick bitch who posts that? Slut

Is there a sequel to come to this story ? - could be the start of a series.

Realistic, plausible, erotic...

The female character is a keeper.