Well-written and moving. The true essence of motherhood.
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Anonymous05/21/10
Gay, just too gay
There's nothing worse than a fat, old gay man writing a gay story. Terrible stuff. Please take up photography and forgot writing. You suck at writing.
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Anonymous05/21/10
A very touching story
The story was pretty short and not what I expect from you as a writer ;-) but it was a pleasant surprise. As to the idiot below's comment on 'too gay', what does that even mean? You're either gay or not. And a beautiful and emotional piece does'nt deserve such rude comments.
sr71plt is a good 'gay male' literotica author. One of the best on this site. If you don't apprieciate his writting stay the hell away.
Sweet and touching. A new story from you is always welcome. Best, Ken
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Anonymous05/24/10
nice
this was a nice story...just waaaaaaaaaay too short!!! i was really just starting to get into the story when i looked around for the rest of it and realized that it was done :(
I love your stuff.... I think I read all and would enjoy reading it all again... This was remarkably sweet as all your other work. You are definitely skilled, keep it up...
You always bring such fresh perspective to familiar issues, and you do so with subtlety and precision - I enjoy that most about your writing. Yes, this story is short, but it was long enough for a single character to share all the emotions and memories my imagination needed in order to flesh out these five people's world: their beliefs, choices, strengths, flaws, insecurities and dreams. Sounds like a job well done to me.
It was a sweet and charming little tale. It reminded me of the works of the great O. Henry.
As to Gay, just too gay, judging from his penmanship, there's no doubt as to why he's not a writer. There's a saying; Those who can, do. Those who can't, become critics, and Gay, just too gay is neither a doer nor critic.
English
Beautiful
Well-written and moving. The true essence of motherhood.
Gay, just too gay
There's nothing worse than a fat, old gay man writing a gay story. Terrible stuff. Please take up photography and forgot writing. You suck at writing.
A very touching story
The story was pretty short and not what I expect from you as a writer ;-) but it was a pleasant surprise. As to the idiot below's comment on 'too gay', what does that even mean? You're either gay or not. And a beautiful and emotional piece does'nt deserve such rude comments.
sr71plt is a good 'gay male' literotica author. One of the best on this site. If you don't apprieciate his writting stay the hell away.
Very sweet
Nicely done. Not much else to say.
Excuse me?
I thought it was a beautiful story.
Constructive criticism is OK but the remarks under Gay but too Gay were down right rude.
Nicely done
Sweet and touching. A new story from you is always welcome. Best, Ken
nice
this was a nice story...just waaaaaaaaaay too short!!! i was really just starting to get into the story when i looked around for the rest of it and realized that it was done :(
Too short!!!!
I love your stuff.... I think I read all and would enjoy reading it all again... This was remarkably sweet as all your other work. You are definitely skilled, keep it up...
Masterfully executed
You always bring such fresh perspective to familiar issues, and you do so with subtlety and precision - I enjoy that most about your writing. Yes, this story is short, but it was long enough for a single character to share all the emotions and memories my imagination needed in order to flesh out these five people's world: their beliefs, choices, strengths, flaws, insecurities and dreams. Sounds like a job well done to me.
Absolutely awesome.
AH
Perfection
It was a sweet and charming little tale. It reminded me of the works of the great O. Henry.
As to Gay, just too gay, judging from his penmanship, there's no doubt as to why he's not a writer. There's a saying; Those who can, do. Those who can't, become critics, and Gay, just too gay is neither a doer nor critic.
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