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Nice Job
Fun and to the point and a great description on the foot job. Seems as if there was more going on between the characters though, like this was part of another story> Do you have more with these 2? i would be interested in reading them!
Nice touches
I liked this little detail in the story: "slid down [...] couch [...] dress began to ride further up her hips" I love that little game of waiting for women to adjust their seat and seeing the clothing make it near possible to catch a glimpse. Last Friday, a girl was sitting in my passenger seat. The cut in her dress almost perfectly aligned itself to let me see her panties. It was such a fun game to wait for it to fall better.
Another favorite sentence: 'She paused "Damn that cum feels good dripping down my feet."' I love it, because it shows that she is in tune with her bodily sensations, playful, and affirming of the whole foot fetish thing.
Multi-layered
I liked it a lot, especially the multi-layered approach of sex, friendship, affection, and of course mind games, all slathered on top of each other. Good job!
Yea right.
I got a feeling mark is about to pull something. He's not gonna take that from her. I wouldnt be surprised if mark turned the tables and made her his pet instead.
Hmm...
Mark sounds like a well-trained lover. Gee, I do wonder who taught him... ;) Excellent story, man.
Try to get even?
For sure she's out the door and down the road. But first, let's not get even, let's get AHEAD - big time. Payback's a bitch.
Then Mark scored two.
He took a bottle and broke two of her toes. Mark - 2 Allison - 1.
Always love a little Mark
To be fair I had a freaking brilliant review written and then my son decided to turn my computer off mid stroke... buh bye review. I can't believe I overlooked this little piece of Mark, always a delight to see him feature, though I have to agree with the other reviewers - can we see him come out on top and turn the mistress into the pet? You know I hate Allison, so any time someone gets the better of her, I'm in! Wonderful imagery as always, and as you know I'm not really a foot fetish person, but damn, your writing may well cure me of that some day (wink) Still hoping to convince you to write more Mark & Megan some day... (wistful sigh)
More please
Hey Lovecraft68
Would love to read what happens next. Will you be writing more about these two?
PS: the tiny mistakes are a bit distracting but not that much. Your stories are just too good after all. A good editor will surely help.
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