Frank and Diane

CRUEL & UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT

nice way to get back at the Cheaters.
and to throw some Fear and Worry into their lives.

Liked it

Good story Bob. Thanks.

Yabba Dabba Do!

Nice one JPB, nice one! That's the way to get even!

Wow, nasty

He really got the job done. Lying, cheating wife reduced to roommate status and her lover made into a eunuch. AND he gets to bang the red hot wife of the lover.
A couple of things rubbed me the wrong way but I know it's my preferences for the way I like things to work out. The big one is that he shackled himself to his wife in an antagonistic situation. I know it's for revenge but who wants to live like that for very long? Get even and get out. Maybe that's part of "the rest of the story" but who wants to see your cheating wife every day?
The second thing that bugged me is the repeatedly inane plan of yet another wife who just wants to "try" a big cock. In the face of this desire her husband and her marriage mean nothing and they are sacrificed without any consideration. I can actually understand this happening and know men and women do this kind of thing all the time. However, once she has been caught and has had several days to think about what has happened the best she can come up with is saying "she just wanted to try a big cock and it doesn't mean anything"? How stupid are these people supposed to be? I can understand them doing things to get into the situation. I can't imagine most people being dumb enough to say it after the fact. How about "Honey, my head got all screwed up about the idea of having sex with a guy with a big penis. I am lower than whale shit for betraying you and especially in your own bed. I am an idiot and will go to counseling to make sure nothing like this happens again. I will do anything else you want to make this up to you. Please forgive me." It doesn't fix anything but at least the woman doesn't sound like a moron. I think the guy's response for a woman looking for a big penis should be "Honey, I am fascinated by boobs. They come in so many sizes and shapes. I am going to try to have sex with lots of women to try out all the types I can. I'll let you know when I am done satisfying my curiosity. Don't worry. It's just sex. Maybe I'll write a book, The Boobs I Have Known. You could be in it too, honey."

Much better than your more recent postings

Agree with Jason. Why would anyone want to remain room mates with a woman he now hates? What a great life, living for revenge!

Fine Revenge tale

Good work by JPB. The revenge was well executed on the "ḧorse". It seems to have benefitted half of the husband in the city. That was another alternative, PI him and send the dossiers to the husbands. Sooner or later someone would have eliminated Stanton He does not mention that he hates his wife, if he did he really should not cohabit with her, but he lost all his love for her, and even takes pleasure in watching her try to get back in his good graces. The problem with the Arlis plan is that Diane could put a PI on Frank.

At least he's not a wimp . . .

Sigh of relief, at least our cuckold is not a wimp. Of course, it would be obvious who did the dirty deed with the cattle prod; he hired private detectives, which is how he knew the who and the when for Mr. North. The P.I.'s are not likely to keep their mouths shut and will probably tell their cop buddies which betrayed husband was their client. But maybe the cops won't try so hard to find our hero -- I'm sure they would be sympathetic and after all, there was no permanent harm other than psychological to our perp's "Johnson." Thanks for writing.

Farm Tools

Definitely like those farm tools. My personal favorite is the Budzio (Bloodless Castrator) Works great. Once done the old jewels just shrivel up and go away and the old lance becomes a limp noodle.

Good one...

Bob, how about just one time....

....the perp's woman ISN"T hot and DOESN'T jump (your) protagonists bones. Then we'll see who's the real tough guy!

Awesome Story

I've long been a fan. I rarely leave comments but this is deserving. JPB is among the top three authors on this site and may very well be my personal favorite.

I love the no-nonsense solution to a problem. Wife cheats; end of relationship. I never understood giving second and third chances...

Very good.

I am a fan for many years. keep it up. (no pun intended)

Another well done story from JPB

I enjoyed all of the turmoil in the story, and the husband getting even.

Revenge is sweet at times.

Thanks for the good entertainment

Very good story

It's a rather classic case of a wife cheating on her husband. The revenge is different and it's interesting; pretty gross but quite effective. I enjoy your stories. Thank you!

Very entertaining read by Tales Master.

Well done !

YOU,,,,,

are very capable of writing a very good story, I certainly hope that you will continue to do so.

Good Story!!

But I agree with JasonH. The "Honey I just wanted to try out a big cock and it was only sex" really makes the cheating wife sound pretty moronic. Sooner or later I would think Frank would get tired of having to see his wife who he hates everyday. At some point he will want to move on with his life and get away from his cheating wife.

Okay, now we're talking!

Good old fashioned revenge, nothing like it. It has that sweet smell of victory. Loved Frank, one of your best protaganists yet. He's smart and brutal, a great combination.

old hide story = 1*

Outstanding story,as is the norm for this excellent Author. 5*!!

I see that our juvenile delinquent Dorkcock was here. Oh well,we cannot keep all of the mentally unbalanced out of this site. Pity.

This Was Cold!!!!!!!

Damn call him the ice man. A cattle prod to the balls. THAT WILL BRING TEARS TO YOUR EYES!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing.

Interesting read...

I have personally bookmarked your profile just due to the fact of your writing talents. I wish to say that this story is brilliant. I hate cuckold stories but these with the revenge factor make them much better for reading pleasure. Due to a remark from you saying for us to figure out what might be true and what is not I can only hope that if you were cheated on you were able to have your revenge. Honor, loyalty, and being true to yourself and others are the only way to live life in my opinion. Probably why I hate stories of people being turned into cuckolds in the first place. Please keep up the good work.

Lostchance (great handle) just remember that

JPB covers every base with his writing. If you like him for this revenge - boy you sure will hate him for maybe the next story you read!

Well my point is..the writers that entertain us take us through all the spectrum of emotion we need to feel. Sometimes its good to feel that warm glow when a story goes our way. So how will it feel when it don't go your way? Blame the author and hate on him - or thank them for stinging us. Oh fuck i ain't got a point. I'll let it to the pro's - the entertainers.

Good revenge?

Maybe. But being forced to see the "wife" every day, eat meals looking at her, working around the house with her in sight. I'm not sure who is getting punished. Frank or Diane?

Just call it a day

She fucks another guy and kills your fantasy of a wife and family - just call it a day. Don't stay, leave, find someplace to live your life the way you want to. Don't live in a sick, miserable situation just to save money or inflict revenge. Revenge is a waste of time. It is a distraction from the mission - survive, procreate and enjoy your life!

REVENGE AND RETALIATION IS OK

but Cruelty in any form, even for a BTB is not acceptable, TK U MLJ LV NV

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The husband was a bit of a dumb guy by picking Stan's wallet and checkbook the second time after he attacked him. If I were the victim in that altercation, I would immediately suspect the one guy who did that to me once before. That the guy is so dumb is fortunate for your protagonist, but it could have just as well been a visit from the police instead of a call from Stan's wife.

nice 2nd read

the idea of taking wallets is very valid, whether they are returned or not is another thing. the info in the wallet is great, gives options not normally found. I personally think he would be advised to get back with wife, otherwise he is just as bad or worse than his wife was.

JPB

I know you say you write for yourself. And, if that's what it really is that's fine. I don't think I have a problem with your story telling. I tend to rate things based on whether I like your characters and their actions. I hate cuck stories, because it's not me. I also don't care much for reconciliation stories either. Sometimes you hit it square on. I liked this one and gave it a five.

Revenge? Or just plain mean?

I can see Frank's point of view. It costs him less to stay in the house. But I would think that he should be busy getting his money house in order so that when the divorce does come he doesn't loose his shirt. And I'm not sure looking a Diane every day is a good solution - short term or long term. I wonder if she has a plan she's working on to screw him? And is Frank thinking he's going to get together with Arlis full time when their marriages crater? She sounds like she's younger and she obviously has children. How old are they? Is she a good option? Frank is playing a dangerous game. A second chapter to close out the story would be nice.

Pictures

I like her getting caught in the lie about not speaking to Stan, yet she knew about the "pictures" that she could only have found out about from Stan.

And I've said this many times, I think even in other JPB stories, but this "curiosity" excuse continues to baffle me. What good can come from satisfying her curiosity?

If it's no better, she's just cheated for nothing, if it's better now what? If she "loves" her husband and doesn't want to lose him, does that mean that she will now live with lesser sex? Or will she do like some of the other wives who expect their husbands to accept their wives fucking other guys?

Well that hurt!

He's not sure a cattle prod will do any damage? What is he - brain dead? Of course it's going to do damage - permanent damage. And why would Arlis stay with a man she knows is screwing multiple women? Isn't she concerned with disease? And last, but not least the cheating wife. Why would she not hire a PI, get pictures of her husband and Arlis and then rape him in the divorce? She has pictures, he has nothing. And she should have known that long ago. An interesting solution to a problem but I can't imagine living with a woman I hate for destroying my marriage. Who needs a daily reminder of her infidelity?

Repeated ideas again...

First that married women will spread it around that one of the guys has a huge dick and they all have to try it; second that eventually the two wronged partners get together. However JPB tells a really good flowing story his "event management" is good. It's a good storyline that the guys who the main character is filling in for at the other office have the same situation of hubby walking in on cheating wife where there is violence committed by the husband whereas here he plays it cool.

JPB tells stories where it's the men who react so differently to the cheating wife: some encourage it; some go mad; some play it cool; some just walk away. Wives who intend to cheat need to find out in advance where their husband lies on this spectrum!

Revenge, or just a realist?

I have never bought the "I still love you" bull from the cheating spouse. With love like that, who needs hate? At best she is lying to herself; but even then, she's still lying to him. Sooo, how is realizing you no longer have a wife and marriage; and doing something about it, divorce, leaving or becoming just roommates, revenge? As I see it, he's just taking the logical next step.

How sad

Well put together but so very sad.I have a friend who caught his wife and it destroyed him.Im so lucky that it cannot happen to me as my wife is my sister and we each are one part each of the same person.We have been together all our lives and have never ever looked at anyone else.When we were growing up we were completely inseparable.We always slept together even when parents said we were to old to do that,but as we never did anything sexual they gave up as we ignored them.When we told them Mom already knew as sis had told her when she was 16 and I found out she was in love with me when I was 18 and she was 19.Dad went mad and we had to leave home.We got ant apartment went to uni together and have never been apart.We gave been called all sorts of names mainly by family.We are still in love completely and most of them are not.I read these stories rarely just to remind me how lucky I am.

I know it is fiction but good fiction has to have a realistic storyline and this certainly didn't. I suppose the clueless BTB's will be happy tho.

Yes!

I LOVED the cattle prod.
Wish I'd thought about that when I caught my wife and her lover. Course, I'd probably have used it on both of them. (But I'd have felt better)

You Know

It might not be the best revenge but I see it more as justice was served. The cheaters got theirs and are suffering. Fucking idiots.

Idle Thought

"he would have given it to the girls he made love to" - I thought it was just "fucking", not making love?

Curiosity

AGAIN the stupid curiosity excuse! As has been said many time by others, (and me!), what can be gained by satisfying curiosity, whether it's about big dicks or just difference in general?

What if it IS better? In the case of this story, is she now going to be a size queen, and look for more big dicks to cheat on her husband with? Or will she "settle" for her husband's "lesser" cock, in which case wouldn't it be better not to know?

Enjoyed it

Thanks for the offering.