It reminded me of my last two girlfriends, the writing was written like stereo instructions. Okay now do this, now do that. It wasn't well put out. It sounded really rushed, and basically like instructions or/and someone short on time and telling what they did to so and so. Far from hot even though I can relate to the story except the mother wasn't my mother but the abuse was very similar. Better luck next time.
This is one of the rare occasions I'm disappointed in a Parabolus story. His normal gift for mother/son incest tales has hit a major speed-bump here. Too short & impersonal. Grade F
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Even though...
It reminded me of my last two girlfriends, the writing was written like stereo instructions. Okay now do this, now do that. It wasn't well put out. It sounded really rushed, and basically like instructions or/and someone short on time and telling what they did to so and so. Far from hot even though I can relate to the story except the mother wasn't my mother but the abuse was very similar. Better luck next time.
What a sick mind you must have
In a word.......PATHETIC
Where's the set-up?
This is one of the rare occasions I'm disappointed in a Parabolus story. His normal gift for mother/son incest tales has hit a major speed-bump here. Too short & impersonal. Grade F
dissapointed
To much " I " , have read your others, this doesn't sound like you at all.
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